Sunnilicious' NaPoWriMo, April 2021
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Jingle Jangle"National Poetry Writing Month, Annual Event
6 total reviews
Comment from Goodadvicechan
The picture is a little bit scary. But it follows the poem and tells a story. "The witch shakes and tosses a bag of bones...
Bones, shells and curios fall to observe ones' life..."
A witch claims she knows the past, the resent and predicts the future as you said in the poem: "The Past is done,
The Present is now, And the Future has been won..."
This is a well written poem
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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The picture is a little bit scary. But it follows the poem and tells a story. "The witch shakes and tosses a bag of bones...
Bones, shells and curios fall to observe ones' life..."
A witch claims she knows the past, the resent and predicts the future as you said in the poem: "The Past is done,
The Present is now, And the Future has been won..."
This is a well written poem
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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Hi! You're nice. Thank you :)
Comment from royowen
I must admit I've never even heard of bone reading, it's not really my cup of tea, or is that a piece of cake? You're doing extremely well dear Alicia, onward to 30 days, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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I must admit I've never even heard of bone reading, it's not really my cup of tea, or is that a piece of cake? You're doing extremely well dear Alicia, onward to 30 days, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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Hi Roy! Hahahahaha, you're funny. Thank you. God bless you :)
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Well done
Comment from BeckyRae
This is very interesting, especially since I recently wrote an article about voodoo for Vocal Media. Not quite the same but still unusual. I like it. You did a good job.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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This is very interesting, especially since I recently wrote an article about voodoo for Vocal Media. Not quite the same but still unusual. I like it. You did a good job.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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Hi! I think reading are fortune telling advisory for entertainment and money. It's just talk. I would love to read your article. You're nice. Thank you :)
Comment from lyenochka
That sounds like a scary event. Thanks for describing it. I like your poem and the well done phrases like "modern ways for this ancient art;" "A doll worries," and " amethyst stone will calm those cries." These make these things come alive.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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That sounds like a scary event. Thanks for describing it. I like your poem and the well done phrases like "modern ways for this ancient art;" "A doll worries," and " amethyst stone will calm those cries." These make these things come alive.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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Hi Helen! Those pieces weren't in my reading. However, I they seem to be safe with its symbolism, from okay to good to great, depending on the individuals' personal reading. Thank you :)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is an interesting theme for your poem, Alicia. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I have never heard of this practice, but it does sound like fortune telling. I like the way you described the 'things' that told your fortune. Good job and best wishes on the remainder of your poems for the project.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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This is an interesting theme for your poem, Alicia. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I have never heard of this practice, but it does sound like fortune telling. I like the way you described the 'things' that told your fortune. Good job and best wishes on the remainder of your poems for the project.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 19-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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Hi Jan! You're nice. Thank you :)
Comment from Kiara Wiggins
Death! It's universal. When a life passes on, we all want to show our love, appreciation, celebration, saddness and respect for that loss of life. Across all cultures, it's the same.
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Death! It's universal. When a life passes on, we all want to show our love, appreciation, celebration, saddness and respect for that loss of life. Across all cultures, it's the same.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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Hi! I found out that Bone Readings to not tell of death or birth. The Reader can only see within your lifetime. However, they tend to have alters for the spirit world. Thank you :)
