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Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Nightfall, Daybreak"na-po-wri-mo contest
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Comment from mermaids
You have some beautiful lines here that take the reader to another place, one with good feelings. I love the lines "crackling leaves whisper fairy tales" and "I hear faint hoots of owls so wise". They give the feeling of daybreak approaching as these words appeal to the senses. Excellent poetic form and use of words.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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You have some beautiful lines here that take the reader to another place, one with good feelings. I love the lines "crackling leaves whisper fairy tales" and "I hear faint hoots of owls so wise". They give the feeling of daybreak approaching as these words appeal to the senses. Excellent poetic form and use of words.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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Dear mermaids, thank you for your comments and review, and for picking out a couple of the lines that I also liked best. Dove
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
wrapped refrain na-po-wri-mo entry
Nightfall, Daybreak
by dovemarie
Hello, Dove Marie,
Wonderful nature imagery with nice alliteration. The font over yellow is hard to read.
Your poem flows well. The structure makes sense. It draws on emotions. it presents strong images.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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wrapped refrain na-po-wri-mo entry
Nightfall, Daybreak
by dovemarie
Hello, Dove Marie,
Wonderful nature imagery with nice alliteration. The font over yellow is hard to read.
Your poem flows well. The structure makes sense. It draws on emotions. it presents strong images.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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Dear Gypsy, thank you for your comments and review. Will go in and look at font. Dove
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are calming, detailed, and creative. I found this
poem to inspire peacefulness. I pondered on the words. The poem
flows and connects well. The artwork chosen goes well with both
the theme and words of this poem.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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The author's words are calming, detailed, and creative. I found this
poem to inspire peacefulness. I pondered on the words. The poem
flows and connects well. The artwork chosen goes well with both
the theme and words of this poem.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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Dear harmony13, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Sharon Davis
This poem meets all the requirements of a wrapped refrain, effectivly- at least 2 stanzas, and the appropriate meter and rhyming schemes. Additionally, it provides a rich sensory description of the narrator's experiences at Daylight, and Nightfall. The presentation is effectively polished with your choice of background and image. Great work.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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This poem meets all the requirements of a wrapped refrain, effectivly- at least 2 stanzas, and the appropriate meter and rhyming schemes. Additionally, it provides a rich sensory description of the narrator's experiences at Daylight, and Nightfall. The presentation is effectively polished with your choice of background and image. Great work.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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Dear Sharon, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Dilettante junior
Nice job with your poem. The photo complements well the beautiful imagery created with the verses. It captured the details of the sunrising from darkness well. Well done!
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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Nice job with your poem. The photo complements well the beautiful imagery created with the verses. It captured the details of the sunrising from darkness well. Well done!
Comment Written 20-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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Dear Dilettante, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I am really enjoying your poems just lately as you have infused them with delightful, uplifting words that are a pleasure to read. You describe the wonderful nature here of natural light falling on those mountains and our homes at different times of the day, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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I am really enjoying your poems just lately as you have infused them with delightful, uplifting words that are a pleasure to read. You describe the wonderful nature here of natural light falling on those mountains and our homes at different times of the day, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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Dear Dolly, thank you for your comments and review. glad you are enjoying my poetry. Love, Donna x
Comment from Boogienights
You have described night and day most eloquently. Needless to say, it's full of wonderful imagery, I could picture it all. I truly enjoyed this well written poem, thanks for sharing. :)
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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You have described night and day most eloquently. Needless to say, it's full of wonderful imagery, I could picture it all. I truly enjoyed this well written poem, thanks for sharing. :)
Comment Written 20-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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Dear Boogienights, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from PENofFIRE
Such a beautiful poem. Your chose your words well to paint of night and the soft touch it offers and morning with the beginning of a new day. Loved it. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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Such a beautiful poem. Your chose your words well to paint of night and the soft touch it offers and morning with the beginning of a new day. Loved it. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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Dear PENof FIRE, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from A Little Bird
Congratulations on this lovely piece. That image is beautiful and complements your poem well. I love the calls of birds; even though I suppose most are territorial, they always seem so friendly and welcoming.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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Congratulations on this lovely piece. That image is beautiful and complements your poem well. I love the calls of birds; even though I suppose most are territorial, they always seem so friendly and welcoming.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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Dear A Little Bird, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from pome lover
very nice, though you stopped me with the stealthy steps in the grass. whoooo? I guess nothing scary since you didn't elaborate. But I'm still curious.
Your words present a lovely picture full of bird song - which I wake up to, also and love.
Katharine - pome lover
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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very nice, though you stopped me with the stealthy steps in the grass. whoooo? I guess nothing scary since you didn't elaborate. But I'm still curious.
Your words present a lovely picture full of bird song - which I wake up to, also and love.
Katharine - pome lover
Comment Written 19-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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Dear Katharine, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
