backroad bliss
a 5 7 5 poem5 total reviews
Comment from 4theloveoftrees
I really enjoyed this 3-liner! Backroad bliss is such a valid statement, isn't it? The poem as a whole flowed well and made sense. Well done!
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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I really enjoyed this 3-liner! Backroad bliss is such a valid statement, isn't it? The poem as a whole flowed well and made sense. Well done!
Comment Written 20-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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Thanks for the encouraging review and sparkly stars. I do miss those summer days in Vermont. Cheers, j
Comment from padumachitta
hello
this is a good wee poem...though now I have an ear worm of John Denver's Country roads...geez.
Vut your poem has that whistfulness that sits inmany of us who live away from our homeland.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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hello
this is a good wee poem...though now I have an ear worm of John Denver's Country roads...geez.
Vut your poem has that whistfulness that sits inmany of us who live away from our homeland.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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Thanks for the review, sorry for the ear worm haha. I do miss my vermont. Cheers, j
Comment from lyenochka
I like your rhyme of "bliss" with "reminisce." There's something magical about the wind that can make us remember. I like that you say that it's the "pine air" which gives us the scent of pine, bringing memories. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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I like your rhyme of "bliss" with "reminisce." There's something magical about the wind that can make us remember. I like that you say that it's the "pine air" which gives us the scent of pine, bringing memories. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 20-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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The air at my cabin is maaaagical. So pure and sweet. and piney.
Missing Vermont Thanks for the always thoughtful review, cheers, j
Comment from Kerry L Batchelder
I grew up in Michigan out in the country. I saw many wild Tiger Lilies and always loved them. Nothing is more beautiful. We also saw Jack in the Pulpit and the simplest Daisy's, in white and yellow; also so beautiful in their own way. I am happy you chose this to remind me of the simple beauty of natures. Beautiful work!
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
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I grew up in Michigan out in the country. I saw many wild Tiger Lilies and always loved them. Nothing is more beautiful. We also saw Jack in the Pulpit and the simplest Daisy's, in white and yellow; also so beautiful in their own way. I am happy you chose this to remind me of the simple beauty of natures. Beautiful work!
Comment Written 19-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
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Jack in the pulpit I remember and Lady's slipper.
A guy thinned out my forest a couple years ago, so I am looking forward to some pretty forest flowers if I can ever get back to Vermont haha..
Thanks for the review, cheers, j
Comment from Begin Again
Your words put me right there ... driving along with the top down, feeling the wind blow through my hair and inhaling that sweet country air. Nicely done. Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
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Your words put me right there ... driving along with the top down, feeling the wind blow through my hair and inhaling that sweet country air. Nicely done. Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 19-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
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Thanks for the reply. My friend and I would always take the backroads driving around Vermont. Great fun, cheers, j
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My son does the same thing. He prefers less traffic and more scenery to enjoy. Smiles, Carol