Sunnilicious' NaPoWriMo, April 2021
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Reality Check"National Poetry Writing Month, Annual Event
6 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
This is so clever! I like how each first line summarized what you detailed in the second and third lines. You have us look outward, look around, and look inward to discover ourselves and do healthy rituals and to treasure ourselves and our loved ones!
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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This is so clever! I like how each first line summarized what you detailed in the second and third lines. You have us look outward, look around, and look inward to discover ourselves and do healthy rituals and to treasure ourselves and our loved ones!
Comment Written 20-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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Hi! I didn't know what to write. I'm happy FanArtReview has pix to inspire my poetic/creative writings. Thank you :)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job with your 575 suite, Alicia. I like your them. You expressed your thoughts and feelings well. Your message is strong. The color scheme and image work well, too. Your syllables are correct per line.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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You did a good job with your 575 suite, Alicia. I like your them. You expressed your thoughts and feelings well. Your message is strong. The color scheme and image work well, too. Your syllables are correct per line.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 19-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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Hi Jan! Thank you. Hearts & hugs :)
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5 suite, Reality Check, has the proper formatting and drops pearls of wisdom along the way as the readers take a moment to study their lives.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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This 5-7-5 suite, Reality Check, has the proper formatting and drops pearls of wisdom along the way as the readers take a moment to study their lives.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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Hi Bill! You're nice. Thank you :)
Comment from Kerry L Batchelder
Simple, true and necessary are all words that come to mind as I read your poem. I like the top illustration, with the bottom illustration as the "frosting on the cake." We all need time to sit and be quiet, reflecting on life. It is often hard to take the time, but necessary and well worth doing. Great message. Beautifully worded.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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Simple, true and necessary are all words that come to mind as I read your poem. I like the top illustration, with the bottom illustration as the "frosting on the cake." We all need time to sit and be quiet, reflecting on life. It is often hard to take the time, but necessary and well worth doing. Great message. Beautifully worded.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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Hi! You're nice. FanArtReview does have inspiring pix. Thank you :)
Comment from royowen
It's so true that every single man, woman and child is unique and important, if that wasn't true, God would never have taken the form of a man, His Son Jesus Christ, and died for all, that's the truth. Beautifully written Alicia, well done, good job, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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It's so true that every single man, woman and child is unique and important, if that wasn't true, God would never have taken the form of a man, His Son Jesus Christ, and died for all, that's the truth. Beautifully written Alicia, well done, good job, blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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Thank you :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Nurturing relationships is one way of making life more liveable and there is nothing like family to make our daily toil pleasant and worth the effort, much enjoyed Alicia, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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Nurturing relationships is one way of making life more liveable and there is nothing like family to make our daily toil pleasant and worth the effort, much enjoyed Alicia, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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Thank you :)