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Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Spring Vacation"na-po-wri-mo contest
8 total reviews
Comment from Dilettante junior
Nicely done. It brings me back to recess time with the teacher watching us from far. Your poem is full of life and speaks greatly of youth and childhood. Bravo!
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
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Nicely done. It brings me back to recess time with the teacher watching us from far. Your poem is full of life and speaks greatly of youth and childhood. Bravo!
Comment Written 19-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
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Dear Dilettante, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Wendy G
This poem has captured the joyful freedom of children at play, and it is refreshing to see the positive aspects of happiness, unity and togetherness as they play and relax, enjoying each other's company. Well written.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
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This poem has captured the joyful freedom of children at play, and it is refreshing to see the positive aspects of happiness, unity and togetherness as they play and relax, enjoying each other's company. Well written.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
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Dear Wendy, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a lighthearted and fun filled post full of positivity and good memories to be stored and reflected upon, much enjoyed and I hope the children enjoy their vacation, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
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This is a lighthearted and fun filled post full of positivity and good memories to be stored and reflected upon, much enjoyed and I hope the children enjoy their vacation, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
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Dear Dolly, thank you for your comments and review Donna x
Comment from Sharon Davis
This Nonet piece has a lovely uplifting theme and tone. The innocence of children playing in the fresh spring air is depicted effectively with the rich use of imagery. The vibrant background color and artwork accompanying the piece is icing on the cake. Great job!
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
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This Nonet piece has a lovely uplifting theme and tone. The innocence of children playing in the fresh spring air is depicted effectively with the rich use of imagery. The vibrant background color and artwork accompanying the piece is icing on the cake. Great job!
Comment Written 18-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
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Dear Sharon, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from juliaSjames
This is a charming nonet, Dove. What could be more delightful than watching children at play. Reading this made me smile.. The conclusion reminded me of last summer. My grandson would collect bumblebees from the honeysuckle hedge. With his fingers! They were probably too full of nectar to sting.
Best of luck in the contest.
Stay safe healthy and blessed
Julia
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
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This is a charming nonet, Dove. What could be more delightful than watching children at play. Reading this made me smile.. The conclusion reminded me of last summer. My grandson would collect bumblebees from the honeysuckle hedge. With his fingers! They were probably too full of nectar to sting.
Best of luck in the contest.
Stay safe healthy and blessed
Julia
Comment Written 18-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
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Dear Julia, thank you for your comments and review. Blessings, Dove
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your nonet reads well, Dove. The syllable count is correct per line. Your word choices are descriptive. I could see the kids playing on their Spring Break. The art fits perfectly.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
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Your nonet reads well, Dove. The syllable count is correct per line. Your word choices are descriptive. I could see the kids playing on their Spring Break. The art fits perfectly.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 18-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
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Dear Jan, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and
presentation, Dove.
-Congratulations on the new job;
it has to bring you joy to
see the young children.
-You wrote a very good nonet
about how they will enjoy
spring vacation.
-Effective imagery, rhyme,
and fun things to see and do.
-Continued success with the project.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
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-Nice artwork and
presentation, Dove.
-Congratulations on the new job;
it has to bring you joy to
see the young children.
-You wrote a very good nonet
about how they will enjoy
spring vacation.
-Effective imagery, rhyme,
and fun things to see and do.
-Continued success with the project.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
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Dear Pam, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
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You are very welcome, Dove.
Comment from royowen
Children are the most fascinating creatures, I'm so happy after being blessed with two daughters, they, in turn have blessed with five grandchildren, whom I have watched with delight grow in the love and nurture of their parents and God. (And we've helped too! Beautifully written nonet, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
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Children are the most fascinating creatures, I'm so happy after being blessed with two daughters, they, in turn have blessed with five grandchildren, whom I have watched with delight grow in the love and nurture of their parents and God. (And we've helped too! Beautifully written nonet, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 18-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
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Dear Roy, thank you for your comments and review, I'm so glad you've been blessed with children and grandchildren. I lost my toddler son to the state at the age of 2, so I transfer all my affection and love to other children. Dove
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They deserve it, that?s lovely
