Flawless
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Comment from Jill McCauslin
Well, the first poem made me laugh and the final entry was a great apology. Good job. Sometimes following rules is truly a challenge, isn't it? Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
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Well, the first poem made me laugh and the final entry was a great apology. Good job. Sometimes following rules is truly a challenge, isn't it? Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
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thanks so much Jill.
Comment from RodG
I really like the humorous TONE of this poem and listening to this mother-of-ten with little modesty describe herself and all she does. I'd like to believe she exists. Rod
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
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I really like the humorous TONE of this poem and listening to this mother-of-ten with little modesty describe herself and all she does. I'd like to believe she exists. Rod
Comment Written 18-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much, but she's pure fantasy.
Comment from Susan Newell
I like this one. I didn't particularly like this contest and your poem is the best answer. I hate to see people beat themselves up, and I'm not impressed by "true confessions." Your response is great: "My flaw is that I have none."
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
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I like this one. I didn't particularly like this contest and your poem is the best answer. I hate to see people beat themselves up, and I'm not impressed by "true confessions." Your response is great: "My flaw is that I have none."
Comment Written 18-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
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I totally agree...thank you so much
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Welcome!
