Aiona's Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 118 "The Busker"Because my portfolio is too messy and I have OCD.
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This put a smile on my face and I think you for that! What a terrific line. I think a little more description would help convey your message. But this is so unique. Great job.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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This put a smile on my face and I think you for that! What a terrific line. I think a little more description would help convey your message. But this is so unique. Great job.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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Thanks, Michael. Yes, I'll rework it.
Comment from Pantygynt
I would think so too. No one is going to give a fart for a song like that. The punters expect the lyrics to be delivered from the other end, trippingly upon the tongue, as Hamlet advised the buskers of his day.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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I would think so too. No one is going to give a fart for a song like that. The punters expect the lyrics to be delivered from the other end, trippingly upon the tongue, as Hamlet advised the buskers of his day.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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Hi, Pantygynt. Thanks for the punny review!