Poems for April
Poems for April3 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
These are wonderful ideas for themes. I stopped at a few thinking what I would write. This could be a good inspiration for people who are having writers' block. There is such a good variety. This is a lt of good work. It looks like you enjoyed putting the humor into it.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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These are wonderful ideas for themes. I stopped at a few thinking what I would write. This could be a good inspiration for people who are having writers' block. There is such a good variety. This is a lt of good work. It looks like you enjoyed putting the humor into it.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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thanks aprpeciate it
Comment from tempeste
First off, I would like to make a suggestion .. instead of posting everything in one single go , you should post every day a contest ,examples (if there are )and and the poem you wrote.
That way you don't end up posting repeats and you avoid kilometre posts that don't encourage people to read them. And that's a shame because you have lots to offer..
That said I love the format Ai Li created ..Cherita...the example you provide written by Ai Li himself overwhelmed me with melancholy..
I find one cloud
in the sky
to describe my loneliness
all this blue
and no one
to share it with
His words, drenched with sadness haunted me for hours.
Kudos! Your try at this format was as touching ... and alone earned my six star vote ..
Every Morning Cherita
When I wake up
And see you there
The darkness of the night
Begins to recede
As the sun lights up
Filling me with your love
I love the transition from the darkness of the night to the light of dawn which obviously serves as a metaphor .... your wife and the love she gives / gifts you everyday.
She is your source of light, warmth, love
In other words she 's your sun...your life bringer..
I enjoyed reading your poem on AI ( The Future is here) and the fear that one day AI will take control of mankind ..
Elon Musk has a similar fear and that's why he created Neuralink
The solution is in the word .he wants to insert just under our skin in contact with out skull / brain a chip that connects us with AI directly ..
He wants to meld both intelligences
As he said our brains can not keep up with Ai but if we are connected to the Ai directly we have a hope of keeping control ..here is a link .. april2021 and the amazing progress his project has made.
.. sci-fic becoming reality
Link:copy and paste:
https://www.google.com.au/amp/s/m.economictimes.com/tech/technology/elon-musks-neuralink-shows-monkey-with-brain-chip-playing-videogame-by-thinking/amp_articleshow/82000047.cms
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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First off, I would like to make a suggestion .. instead of posting everything in one single go , you should post every day a contest ,examples (if there are )and and the poem you wrote.
That way you don't end up posting repeats and you avoid kilometre posts that don't encourage people to read them. And that's a shame because you have lots to offer..
That said I love the format Ai Li created ..Cherita...the example you provide written by Ai Li himself overwhelmed me with melancholy..
I find one cloud
in the sky
to describe my loneliness
all this blue
and no one
to share it with
His words, drenched with sadness haunted me for hours.
Kudos! Your try at this format was as touching ... and alone earned my six star vote ..
Every Morning Cherita
When I wake up
And see you there
The darkness of the night
Begins to recede
As the sun lights up
Filling me with your love
I love the transition from the darkness of the night to the light of dawn which obviously serves as a metaphor .... your wife and the love she gives / gifts you everyday.
She is your source of light, warmth, love
In other words she 's your sun...your life bringer..
I enjoyed reading your poem on AI ( The Future is here) and the fear that one day AI will take control of mankind ..
Elon Musk has a similar fear and that's why he created Neuralink
The solution is in the word .he wants to insert just under our skin in contact with out skull / brain a chip that connects us with AI directly ..
He wants to meld both intelligences
As he said our brains can not keep up with Ai but if we are connected to the Ai directly we have a hope of keeping control ..here is a link .. april2021 and the amazing progress his project has made.
.. sci-fic becoming reality
Link:copy and paste:
https://www.google.com.au/amp/s/m.economictimes.com/tech/technology/elon-musks-neuralink-shows-monkey-with-brain-chip-playing-videogame-by-thinking/amp_articleshow/82000047.cms
Comment Written 17-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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thanks for the detailed feedback appreciated it lots to ponder
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I think you are supposed to write a poem a day. So a different poem each day. As this is it's a bit much to take in with one reading. But I did enjoy what I read and am impressed with the creativity in your writing.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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I think you are supposed to write a poem a day. So a different poem each day. As this is it's a bit much to take in with one reading. But I did enjoy what I read and am impressed with the creativity in your writing.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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I thought it was at least once poem a day a bit behind in my postings on Fan Story
