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Comment from Chris Fruge
This was a really neat piece. The rhyming made it fun, yet there was the serious undertone of someone not dealing with their issues by drinking too much.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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This was a really neat piece. The rhyming made it fun, yet there was the serious undertone of someone not dealing with their issues by drinking too much.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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Dear Chris, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
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You?re welcome!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your monorhyme poem, Dove. Your lines read well with a sad, but often true, story to tell. I like the image and the color scheme.
Best wishes for the rest of the month of poems.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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You did a great job with your monorhyme poem, Dove. Your lines read well with a sad, but often true, story to tell. I like the image and the color scheme.
Best wishes for the rest of the month of poems.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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Dear Jan, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
