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Comment from Dilettante junior
Nice job. The photo is a great one. It complements the poem as one visualises what you described. Seagulls are beautiful creatures. They inspire freedom as they soar. Keep it up!
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
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Nice job. The photo is a great one. It complements the poem as one visualises what you described. Seagulls are beautiful creatures. They inspire freedom as they soar. Keep it up!
Comment Written 19-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
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Dear Dilettante, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written lune poem. Beautiful photo selection of the seagull to compliment your words as well. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
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This is a nicely written lune poem. Beautiful photo selection of the seagull to compliment your words as well. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
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Dear Joanne, thank you for your comments, review, and good luck wishes. Dove
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent mind visual of an Eagle soaring over dunes. This is and excellent entry in this lune poetry contest, a worthy contestant, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
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This is an excellent mind visual of an Eagle soaring over dunes. This is and excellent entry in this lune poetry contest, a worthy contestant, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 18-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
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Dear Roy, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
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Welcome
Comment from Sharon Davis
This Lune poem, describes the flight of a fledgling seagull, visually and aurally. The image chosen reinforces the tone of the poem- soaring. Good job.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
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This Lune poem, describes the flight of a fledgling seagull, visually and aurally. The image chosen reinforces the tone of the poem- soaring. Good job.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
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Dear Sharon, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from pome lover
This is a good lune even though it's about a seagull ( a little joke, there).
However, I have a question. How do you know it's a fledgling? Or a "her", for that matter? Or is that taking poetic license? (which is fine. I do it all the time) too far? Just curios. it's a neat poem and lovely picture.
Katharine -pome lover
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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This is a good lune even though it's about a seagull ( a little joke, there).
However, I have a question. How do you know it's a fledgling? Or a "her", for that matter? Or is that taking poetic license? (which is fine. I do it all the time) too far? Just curios. it's a neat poem and lovely picture.
Katharine -pome lover
Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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Dear Katharine, Just using poetic license. Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
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well, it's pretty -poem and picture.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job with your contest entry, Dove. I enjoyed reading it. Good job with the correct syllable count per line. The image and your words pair nicely. I could see this as I read. Enjoyed your notes. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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You did a good job with your contest entry, Dove. I enjoyed reading it. Good job with the correct syllable count per line. The image and your words pair nicely. I could see this as I read. Enjoyed your notes. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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Dear Jan, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Anne Johnston
"Fledgling seagull cries
Spreads her wings
Soaring over dunes"
Great description of the seagull. They are nice to watch when they are soaring through the sky, but sometimes a nuisance on the ground, begging for scraps from your picnic.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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"Fledgling seagull cries
Spreads her wings
Soaring over dunes"
Great description of the seagull. They are nice to watch when they are soaring through the sky, but sometimes a nuisance on the ground, begging for scraps from your picnic.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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Dear Anne, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
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You are welcome
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of your thirteen syllables in this lovely, descriptive piece about the young trying their wings--jubilantly, with that new sense of freedom.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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You have made excellent use of your thirteen syllables in this lovely, descriptive piece about the young trying their wings--jubilantly, with that new sense of freedom.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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Dear Janice, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You captured these seagulls and the noises they make which always remind me that I am at the coast, holidaying and we never mind them soaring overheard, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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You captured these seagulls and the noises they make which always remind me that I am at the coast, holidaying and we never mind them soaring overheard, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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Dear Dolly, thank you for your comments and review. Love, Donna x
