Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao mystery poet!

I gave you your first vote ..

My eyes were popping out .. at times I have entitled a poem in my language but you dared to write a whole poem .. ( thumbs up)

Sei italiano/a per caso?

I love your words and the whole presentation ..

Ti auguro di vincere !

Ciao!

PS I desire you .....would be a closer translation than

I want you

but it s okay how you said it too

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021

I'm winging it here...Italian heritage, but non parlo la lingua. Grazie molto mio amico.
I meant to say "desire"...darn!

reply by tempeste on 18-Apr-2021

Ho capito .. comunque ho apprezzato che tu abbia voluto scrivere la tua poesia in italiano .. che second me e? la lingua più bella del mondo .. ( biggrin)

Buon weekend!

reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021

Ho nostalgia di casa quando sento l'italiano. Deve essere un ricordo dimenticato da tempo. Grazie mille per questa possibilità di "ascoltarlo" ancora una volta. Linda

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Thanks for the translation. I thought this was a beautiful poem that for me shares what young love is all about. Perfect word choices and I think your poem translates easily to English. Great job.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021

Thank you so much!

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Loving words here in Italian and they say so much about these faithful lovers who are in a passionate embrace, a fine presentation for the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021

Thank you for your review...I just hope I haven't broken any rule written in tiny letters, but Italian is one of the languages of love and it seemed appropriate:))
Linda