Seek A Welcomed Gift
Seek Happiness!9 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
You are absolutely right. Nothing in this world can buy happiness. We are not promised happiness in this world either, even if we follow Him, because the world brings tribulation, and sometimes we pay a price for following Him. But, as you say we have hope, and peace, in the midst of everything, and his strength. good wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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You are absolutely right. Nothing in this world can buy happiness. We are not promised happiness in this world either, even if we follow Him, because the world brings tribulation, and sometimes we pay a price for following Him. But, as you say we have hope, and peace, in the midst of everything, and his strength. good wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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Thank you so very much for your kind review and support. Much appreciated.
Comment from Sharon Davis
This 3-5-3 poem conveys a message that resonates for many. Happiness is certainly not something one can buy, not even with all the wealth in the world.
Nicely presented
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
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This 3-5-3 poem conveys a message that resonates for many. Happiness is certainly not something one can buy, not even with all the wealth in the world.
Nicely presented
Comment Written 18-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
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Thank you. Sharon Davis. Your review is appreciated.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your words plus picture create a great contest entry, Mystery Author. Your syllable count is correct per line. You give readers much to ponder in a good way. I like your 'happy' color scheme. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
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Your words plus picture create a great contest entry, Mystery Author. Your syllable count is correct per line. You give readers much to ponder in a good way. I like your 'happy' color scheme. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 17-Apr-2021
Comment from Patty Palmer
Amen! Belief in the Father and having faith in Him that He will protect us is the only way I feel that I'm making it through this horrible mess. It's one thing to maybe change things around for the better. Biden and the gang are doing it just for spite at Donald Trump. They aren't doing anything to make Trump look bad. In fact, they're showing everyone what a great president he was. I'm sure that many who didn't want Trump back in are now wishing they hadn't voted for Biden. We have to trust in the Lord. Everything is possible in the Lord!
Patty
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
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Amen! Belief in the Father and having faith in Him that He will protect us is the only way I feel that I'm making it through this horrible mess. It's one thing to maybe change things around for the better. Biden and the gang are doing it just for spite at Donald Trump. They aren't doing anything to make Trump look bad. In fact, they're showing everyone what a great president he was. I'm sure that many who didn't want Trump back in are now wishing they hadn't voted for Biden. We have to trust in the Lord. Everything is possible in the Lord!
Patty
Comment Written 17-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
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Your sincere review is much appreciated. Thank you.
Comment from Anne Johnston
"All the Money
In our world can't buy.
Happiness!"
Very true words you have written. Jesus is the only true source of happiness and as we trust in Him, He takes us through the difficult times in life.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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"All the Money
In our world can't buy.
Happiness!"
Very true words you have written. Jesus is the only true source of happiness and as we trust in Him, He takes us through the difficult times in life.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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Thank your so very much. You are appreciated.
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You are welcome
Comment from Ozymandias504
This is so hackneyed and trite I don't feel compelled to say any more. It doesn't deserve comment. But I have to blather on for 150 characters, so I will simply repeat myself. Trite - Hackneyed - Wasted Space.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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This is so hackneyed and trite I don't feel compelled to say any more. It doesn't deserve comment. But I have to blather on for 150 characters, so I will simply repeat myself. Trite - Hackneyed - Wasted Space.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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Thank you for your time to comment. All the best to you.
Comment from DragonSkulls
I like your little poem here, author. I'm not sure if anyone has told you yet or not but this contest requires the syllable count to be 3-5-3. Your very first line has 4 syllables. This minor mistake will keep the contest from going to booth in a timely manner. It's an easy fix if you're interested. Simply change the word 'money' to 'wealth.' I would also suggest deleting the period after the second line. "All the money in our world can't buy." isn't actually a whole sentence. Just a suggestion. I hope this helped. Best of luck in the contest.
DS
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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I like your little poem here, author. I'm not sure if anyone has told you yet or not but this contest requires the syllable count to be 3-5-3. Your very first line has 4 syllables. This minor mistake will keep the contest from going to booth in a timely manner. It's an easy fix if you're interested. Simply change the word 'money' to 'wealth.' I would also suggest deleting the period after the second line. "All the money in our world can't buy." isn't actually a whole sentence. Just a suggestion. I hope this helped. Best of luck in the contest.
DS
Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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Thank you so very much for your valuable review. Much appreciated.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Few words speaking the truth here. Happiness is an inner contentment not all of us achieve. It is all about being at peace and appreciating the small things in life, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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Few words speaking the truth here. Happiness is an inner contentment not all of us achieve. It is all about being at peace and appreciating the small things in life, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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Thank you for your review. Your comments and rating are appreciated.
Comment from Mansi Gupta 31
Blessings plays an important role in Indian's life. Because we grow up like respect your elders take there blessing and you will definitely succeed in you life!
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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Blessings plays an important role in Indian's life. Because we grow up like respect your elders take there blessing and you will definitely succeed in you life!
Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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Thank you again for your review. Very much appreciated.
