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Sunnilicious' NaPoWriMo, April 2021

Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "The Bus Driver"
National Poetry Writing Month, Annual Event

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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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Well this brings me back! The quiet bus driver is the one that gets the kids nervous. It's going to be an anything goes ride or as you wrote the eye in the mirror ready to pounce. Great job! This was an enjoyable read and brought me down memory lane.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2021

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Yes, bus drivers have eyes in back of their heads and ears as big as elephants. I enjoyed your fun poem. Your repeated line works well without shouting 'I'm a repeated line.' I like the little story your told. The ending was fun--wondering who was in trouble--not me.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
    Hi Jan! I'm not married with children, however, I doubt they are still so naive behaved with cellphones and video games. That poem is probably me and my friends back in the early 80's. Hahahahaha. Thank you :)
Comment from royowen
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Yes indeed, traditionally bus drivers are a very grumpy bunch. I think they must be given a prescription of "grumpy" pills as a condition of the job, heh heh. Well done with your progress Alicia, good job, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
    Hi Roy! Thank you. Have a great weekend :)
reply by royowen on 17-Apr-2021
    You too Alicia
Comment from Pantygynt
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I hope our Damommy reads this. I wonder if she identifies with your mute bus driver. She used to drive a school bus some time ago so she could well do.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
    Hi! That poem is probably me and my friends back in the early 80's. Hahahahaha. I had an aunt that was a bus assistant some years back too. You're nice. Thank you :)
Comment from lyenochka
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That's so cute! Thank you for taking us into a school bus and all that must go on - the gossiping among the kids, the bus driver deep in thought and the possibility that someone might be in trouble!

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
    Hi! Thank you :)