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All In Faith

Faith poetry poem

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Comment from LJbutterfly
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This is a beautiful entry in the Faith poetry contest, and I hope you do well. Your personal faith is demonstrated in your poem. Your artwork pairs perfectly with your words.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2021


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Comment from AnnaLinda
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Raul,

Your free verse poem and entry for the Faith Poetry Contest is beautiful.
I like your sincere thoughts presented about your faith.

The following lines stood out to me:

"Faith is mysterious
the beauty of it is
that it makes good things happen
ideas come to life."

Your poem is also nicely presented,

AnnaLinda

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2021


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Comment from Janetsue
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This is a beautiful entry for the faith contest, Raul. Strong faith gets us through many difficult and extreme situations. It is always a wondrous thing to realize how we have been blessed just because our hearts truly believe. Best wishes in the contest! (I have been away for a few months recovering from surgery. I'm very glad to be back now and reading the postings of my friends once more.) Smiles, Janet

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2021


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Comment from Irish Rain
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Yes, absolutely...
faith is 100% your belief.
Without belief...no change.
I like this, it simply states
that which is so hard to explain.
Blessings...

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
    Thank you!
reply by Irish Rain on 15-Apr-2021
    You're most welcome!!
Comment from Megan Noel
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This is outstanding! In my view, faith is a tough one to write about. It is intangible. Your work doesn't come across as preachy or anything like that. I am sure that is hard not to do when writing on faith.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
    Thank you so much! You have made my day! Much appreciated! Happy weekend to you! :)
Comment from nomi338
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Faith in the word of God and his faithful son Jesus Christ, form the pathway to salvation. Failure to have faith in these two will ultimately lead to destruction. You will not succeed in life without faith in God and his son the Christ.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2021


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Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
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This is a nicely written poem for faith entry. Faith is mysterious the beauty of it is that it makes good things happen. Ideas come to life. Nice photo to go with your words. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2021


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Comment from Anne Johnston
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"Miracles are realized
the wonders of it all
it comes true.
Ask for it
and you will recieve"
A good poem for the faith contest. Just noticed a typo - word "receive"


 Comment Written 15-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
    Thank you! Typo corrected. Thanks for the help!
reply by Anne Johnston on 15-Apr-2021
    You are welcome
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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receive (sp)
Beautifully written poem of faith. Your second stanza I find powerful as says that faith is mysterious and in believing and having faith life is better with than without.
Good luck in the contest.
Regards,
Mary

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
    Thank you and thanks for the help! I have corrected the mistake.
Comment from royowen
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Well done Raul, faith is as much an action as a decision to make the move to believe, the emotion, I believe, follows the action, and as God says, "Without faith it is impossible to pleas God." Hebrews 11:6. Beautfully written, well done, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 15-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
    Thank you!
reply by royowen on 15-Apr-2021
    A pleasure