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Creative Collections

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na-po-wri-mo contest

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Comment from Chyniomi
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I love your poem and it's circular effect. The flow of the poem mirrors the meaning in your journey. I enjoyed reading it. Instead of being repetitive, it builds on the previous phrase.

 Comment Written 04-May-2021

reply by the author on 04-May-2021
    Dear Chyniomi, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from equestrik
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I truly enjoyed the positivity of this write and find the loop poems interesting. I feel it is a creative presentation with a lovely picture to go with your writing.

 Comment Written 04-May-2021

reply by the author on 04-May-2021
    Dear equestrik, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from ~Dovey
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This is a wonderful Loop poem, Donna. Sometimes I feel like the repetitious nature of the Loop words feels forced. Not so with this piece.

Good luck in the contest!

Kim

 Comment Written 01-May-2021

reply by the author on 01-May-2021
    Dear Kim, thank you for your comments and review. Donna
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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You did a good job with your contest entry, Dove. Your words have good flow and great meaning to all. I like the image and the color scheme. Your words are thoughtful and describe your creative collections well.

May I suggest ~
add 's' to the word feeling--->feelings in line 1

Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2021

reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
    Dear Jan, thanks for your comments, review. and suggestion. Dove
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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I thought this was a well written poem. I like how your poem if full of hope while also looking back on the past paths. A very creative and well written poem. Great job.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2021

reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
    Dear Michael, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Pantygynt
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This is the sort of loop I like
like because it chains along
along its length but when it ends
ends with its tail tucked in its mouth
mouth that spouted looping words
words that linked in straight line chain
chain that ended in a loop
loop that left it just like this

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2021

reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
    Dear Pantygynt, thank you for your comments and review in loop form. Dove
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A fine nature loop to include all those wonderful scenes that delight us when we go exploring outside, I enjoyed your seamless words here, a fine poem, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2021

reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
    Dear Dolly, thank you for your comments and review. Love, donna x
Comment from Leann DS
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This is very lyrical and pretty and has a lovely message. I saw the loop poetry contest coming up, and I read on the Internet that it is supposed to have an abcb rhyme scheme. Did I get bad information again? :-)

Well done on this lyrical and well written piece. Hugs.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2021

reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
    Dear Leann, thank you for your comments and review. Hugs to you too! Dove