Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

Great work putting all the required words into your beautiful rhyming poem.
Excellent message, rhyme and alliteration througout.

Well done.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021

Thank you for your review and comments.

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

Through the inclusion of vivid, expressive descriptions, you have conveyed a lovely message about the power of gospel music to soothe and excite, simultaneously, to bring us closer to the Lord.

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021

Thank you for your review and comments.

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

This is a beautiful poem about the relationship between music and faith. It has been that way throughout the ages, praising the Lord in song. A great use of the required words, best of luck in the contest. :)

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021

Thank you for your review, very kind comments and best wishes.

Comment from Patty Palmer

Exceptional

Lifting up our praise in song is the most invigorating way I know of to praise the Lord. The minute the Praise Team sets foot on the altar my heart, my mind, my praise is ready to rock it on. The lyrics hit home and thank the Lord for the talented people who lead us in this way.
My son belongs to a Christian Band. He has written some songs that they hope to record as soon as they can. The name of the band is JUSTIFIED. Great work!
Patty

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021

Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and six-star rating; they are greatly appreciated.

Blessings...

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

I love it too, and it tuns my spiritual heart heavenward. It lifts my mood no matter what. I enjoyed this poem, mystery poet, and wish you well in the upcoming contest. Blessings always,
Sal :))

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021

Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments, and best wishes.

Blessings...

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

The Beauty of Gospel Music

Wow, excellent entry for the ,Use These Words writing prompt contest. I like how you colored the contest words... Makes it easier for the reader. The rhymes do not seem forced. Your poem flows well. It draws on emotions and it presents strong images.

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments.

Blessings...

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Your contest entry is a perfectly written. It should show well. I am a huge fan of the gospel music. I can always sing a song in my head when things get bad and peace overcomes thing. Good luck luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021

Thank you for your review and best wishes.

Comment from Sarah Butterfly

Excellent

Nice contest entry, however you have used the word sacred where it was supposed to be scared. Solid end rhyme used throughout your poem.

Kind regards
Sarah

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021

Thank you for your review and for bringing to my attention the word I used was incorrect. Your review and kindness are greatly appreciated.

Comment from elchupakabra

Excellent

Personally, if I'm going to listen to gospel music, I need mine to have a little soul.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B59tcEmQloA&list=PLxyLMyO8M-muH6_IQt91vJ0JwBts6F5tA&index=2

Good work on this piece, thanks for sharing. Later daze.

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021

Thanks so much for your review.

Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan

Excellent

A very beautifully worded spiritual poem. Word usage is perfect. Gospel music allows us to become closer to God and closer to each other. Thanks for sharing. Good luck!

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021

Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments, and best wishes...