Comment from Mia Twysted

Excellent

Interesting take on the hat that collects the money. I was a bit confused when I read it through the first time because I had not fully assimilated the hat in the place of a performing monkey.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2021

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

A clever entry, with the reading making wrong assumptions! You have written your story very well, and built up to this successful ending. Sending good wishes for the contest.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

That was a lovely little story, with a wonderful, funny ending. I think you will do alright in the contest, it's unique and you wrote it all in 100 words. Very clever. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Well, that was a unique story. I think this is the first story about a hat I have read on the site. I see nothing that should corrected or improved. It was very interesting. Perhaps a street would think like this, while on the circuit.

Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021

Thanks for your review. I like to think you can write a story about anything, even a hat.

Comment from R.E.R.

Good

very cute and descriptive, love the imagery and emotion :) also a fun and unique perspective! i have never seen a story written from the perspective of a performing monkey.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021

Thanks very much for your review.

Comment from Jasmine Girl

Excellent

It's so true. That is how I feel every day even though I haven't been busy and are still getting paid a good salary of software engineer while writing fictions, scripts and poetry. We are slaves for sure.

Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021

Thanks for your review. Everyone is somebody?s performing monkey!!

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Wow, you have a very original story here, and is quite funny your monkey business:"I am his performing monkey. Whilst he sits there in his bright, enticing colours collecting the moolah I'm the one doing the work, the thing that makes them pull out their wallets in the first place.
." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.