Enjoying The Park Again
100 Word Story contest entry9 total reviews
Comment from Goodadvicechan
I like the story. It is sad that our country is becoming less safe.
Chicago is bad. New York lately is not any better... The crimes in subway are getting worse and worse everyday. Crazy people push people into the train track...
Thanks for sharing this story.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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I like the story. It is sad that our country is becoming less safe.
Chicago is bad. New York lately is not any better... The crimes in subway are getting worse and worse everyday. Crazy people push people into the train track...
Thanks for sharing this story.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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Thank you for the great review, Good. Yes, it's getting bad everywhere. I heard there was another mass shooting Illinois last night. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this little piece. Have a great weekend.
Ron
Comment from Begin Again
Guess a grizzly bear would definitely keep all the riff-raff away and probably most anyone else that felt like wandering through. One growl and the park would be yours. Smiles - Carol
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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Guess a grizzly bear would definitely keep all the riff-raff away and probably most anyone else that felt like wandering through. One growl and the park would be yours. Smiles - Carol
Comment Written 15-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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Lol. Thank you for the great review, Carol. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have yourself a fantastic weekend.
Comment from Rebel Jim
What unique a presentation I'd say it's perfect for this prompt!
Wish I'd thought of it... My compliments!
Well written without any mistakes, that I saw...
And the picture is awesome!
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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What unique a presentation I'd say it's perfect for this prompt!
Wish I'd thought of it... My compliments!
Well written without any mistakes, that I saw...
And the picture is awesome!
Comment Written 15-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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Thank you for the awesome review, Jim. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have yourself a great day.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
I think this is a winner. I love it. We make our decisions wisely when we have the tools to protect ourselves. LOL This is very imaginative writing that tickles my fancy.
Ralf
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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I think this is a winner. I love it. We make our decisions wisely when we have the tools to protect ourselves. LOL This is very imaginative writing that tickles my fancy.
Ralf
Comment Written 15-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review, Ralf. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked this silliness. Have yourself a great day.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I like your "silly pic." You did
a good job with it.
-I like your story, too.
-It is creative and well written.
-A good opening, followed by
how things were changing
in the neighborhood.
-A very good ending, too!
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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-I like your "silly pic." You did
a good job with it.
-I like your story, too.
-It is creative and well written.
-A good opening, followed by
how things were changing
in the neighborhood.
-A very good ending, too!
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Pam. Yeah, I love playing around in my art program. I really appreciate the gracious stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this little piece.
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You are very welcome and thanks for sharing in your reply. What kind of art program do you use?
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I use this program called GIMP. It's free to download and use on a PC. I use it for almost all my posts. I love it and for free you can't beat it.
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Thanks for sharing. I'll take a look at it.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Sure Mister Bear is an incredible companion. No thug in, or out, of their right mind would dare approach you in the wrong manner now. Makes the park much more enjoyable no doubt.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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Sure Mister Bear is an incredible companion. No thug in, or out, of their right mind would dare approach you in the wrong manner now. Makes the park much more enjoyable no doubt.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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Lol. Thank you for the great review, Brett. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have yourself a great day.
Comment from RodG
This story was fun to read because I live near Chicago, and listen to the police reports every day. I can almost believe a blind man getting a "seeing eye bear" to protect himself. Rod
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2021
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This story was fun to read because I live near Chicago, and listen to the police reports every day. I can almost believe a blind man getting a "seeing eye bear" to protect himself. Rod
Comment Written 14-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2021
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It sure couldn't hurt. Lol. Thank you for the great review and stars, Rod. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
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My pleasure.
Comment from Jo Elle
Those bears are hard to tame but lovely and faithful if you treat them right ;)
The story is well written and reads easily, until a fun surprise ending... even if, of course, one could guess there was a bear in the picture.
Fun and well done!
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2021
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Those bears are hard to tame but lovely and faithful if you treat them right ;)
The story is well written and reads easily, until a fun surprise ending... even if, of course, one could guess there was a bear in the picture.
Fun and well done!
Comment Written 14-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2021
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Yes, they can be a bit hard to train. Lol. Thank you for the great review and stars, Jo. I'm glad you liked this silliness.
Comment from lancellot
Good job with the picture and the story. If only all it takes is a seeing eye bear. It is a funny take on a real issue. I think you've done well with the one hundred words you had. This will certainly put a smile on many readers face and stand out from the crowd.
Good luck to you.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2021
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Good job with the picture and the story. If only all it takes is a seeing eye bear. It is a funny take on a real issue. I think you've done well with the one hundred words you had. This will certainly put a smile on many readers face and stand out from the crowd.
Good luck to you.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2021
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Thank you for the great review, Lancellot. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
