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spontaneous love

a 100 word story

4 total reviews 
Comment from Begin Again
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A nice bright and colorful spin to an age old problem of the homeless trying to find their nook and make a little change. Interesting and a nice read. Good luck in the contest. Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
    Thanks for the insightful review. I love random acts of kindness. Cheers, j
Comment from Jo Elle
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That kind of spontaneous love is becoming scarcer by the day. It is nice to read a gentle story where nothing hard or ugly happens.
The best to you in the contest!

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
    Thanks for the thoughtful review, cheers, j
Comment from Susan Newell
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This is a really sweet story about a random act of kindness. I could picture the whole scene very easily and almost pictured hippies from the sixties distributing songs and flowers.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
    Thanks for the review Susan. Exactly that kind of scene.
    Have a peaceful day, j
reply by Susan Newell on 19-Apr-2021
    You are welcome.
Comment from Raul1
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This story meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2021
    Thanks for the encouraging review Raul. Random acts of kindness are always in style, cheers have a great day, j
reply by Raul1 on 19-Apr-2021
    You're welcome!