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Sunnilicious' NaPoWriMo, April 2021

Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "What's In A Name?"
National Poetry Writing Month, Annual Event

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Comment from Irish Rain
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This is so interesting!
I just LOVE the name Soonire...
it's SO pretty.
My husband has a 'U' in his last name.
I didn't take his name though, I like my own
just fine.
This is a most unique piece!
Blessings...

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
    Hi Judy! You're nice. I was named after my dad's mom, but she took the name from marriage to my grandfather. Grandma was actually pure French Caribbean and Grandfate was born in India. And I like your name. It suits you well, Mrs. Larry. Hahahahaha. Thank you :)
reply by Irish Rain on 16-Apr-2021
    Ha ha...I love your humor.
    Your name sounds like a lovely
    midnight flower.
    God bless....
Comment from AnnaLinda
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Sunni, I mean...Soonire-Alicia Seecharan...This is an excellent post and
it brought me a smile. Good for you!

This is so very funny!

"A "u" could happen, eventually, through marriage. I should not seek out a man because he has a "u" in his last name."

Super 5/7/5 offering in this as well,

AnnaLinda

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
    Hellow Anna Linda! You're nice. Thank you.
    Have a great weekend :)
Comment from lyenochka
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I love your name and your reflection on it (and you're right - don't marry someone for the 'u' in his name!) But that final haiku/575 is stunning! Definitely six-worthy.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2021

Comment from Anne Johnston
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"Names are a blessing
No third person point of view
Permanent markers"
I like your verse, especially the illustration of a name being a permanent marker. Thanks for the information about your name.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2021

Comment from papa55mike
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This form is similar to a Haibun. I don't have any U's in my name either. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!

Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2021

Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem, What's in a Name?, describes and breaks down your name nicely, with emphasis on the vowels used with the exception of U. No Y either -- not even sometimes.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2021

Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Nice image and
presentation, Alicia.
-Interesting prose section
with good detail about
the nature of your name.
-A well written poem as
a follow up, as well.
-Continued success with the project.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2021