Victor Viper
A village meets a family's need4 total reviews
Comment from mobileliz
Good word choices and taught the golden rule without being too preachy. Also, gave a good example of being appreciative and paying it forward after being helped. Nice Story.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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Good word choices and taught the golden rule without being too preachy. Also, gave a good example of being appreciative and paying it forward after being helped. Nice Story.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much for your kind review.
Comment from Bettyanne Twigg
You made me smile, and your story had a certain charm. It would make a very cute children's book. I can see the "vocabulary" in print. Teaching as well as humor. Cute. Smiles, stay safe and happy.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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You made me smile, and your story had a certain charm. It would make a very cute children's book. I can see the "vocabulary" in print. Teaching as well as humor. Cute. Smiles, stay safe and happy.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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I have 26 short stories put together with a glossary for each. I was hoping to use this as a teaching tool to help anyone learn the alphabet. We shall see. I do want to thank you for the review and kind words. Blessings to you Bettyanne
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Best of luck. I just posted what may become part of a book about WW2 as I experienced it . From the eyes of a child. Not sure where it will go. Just an idea.
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Best of luck. I just posted what may become part of a book about WW2 as I experienced it . From the eyes of a child. Not sure where it will go. Just an idea.
Comment from Jay Squires
You've written a clever, humorous story Mr, Mrs. or Ms. anonymity. That's not an easy job using so many letter C's. Okay, okay, I'm pulling your leg, but I really did enjoy reading this, and I want to wish you the best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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You've written a clever, humorous story Mr, Mrs. or Ms. anonymity. That's not an easy job using so many letter C's. Okay, okay, I'm pulling your leg, but I really did enjoy reading this, and I want to wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Hey Jay, thank you for the review and the bit of humor. By the way its 'Mrs. but you can call me Pen of Fire
Comment from Leann DS
I like this alliteration story for children. It has a good message. Actually, it has two good messages: helping others, and paying it forward. Well done and best of luck to you in the contest. :-)
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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I like this alliteration story for children. It has a good message. Actually, it has two good messages: helping others, and paying it forward. Well done and best of luck to you in the contest. :-)
Comment Written 13-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Thank you Leann for the review. Much appreciated.
