Saving Mankind
Robot VS. Human contest entry5 total reviews
Comment from Jo Elle
After being a computer worker for many years (meaning I kept trying to make the computer look good and the user understand the bug was between the keyboard and the chair) I still have a soft spot as far as computers, or even robots go.
I liked this poem, with its short lines creating a story, and all in good rhymes.
Thanks for the smile :)
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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After being a computer worker for many years (meaning I kept trying to make the computer look good and the user understand the bug was between the keyboard and the chair) I still have a soft spot as far as computers, or even robots go.
I liked this poem, with its short lines creating a story, and all in good rhymes.
Thanks for the smile :)
Comment Written 15-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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Haha. Between the keyboard and the chair. Too funny. Thank you for the fantastic review and gracious stars, Jo. I'm glad you liked my little offering.
Comment from Dilettante junior
Humorously deep and engaging. Very creative imagination. Beautiful technological ensemble. A pretty sympathetic robot i should say. You get us to experience his existential plight first hand. Bravo!
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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Humorously deep and engaging. Very creative imagination. Beautiful technological ensemble. A pretty sympathetic robot i should say. You get us to experience his existential plight first hand. Bravo!
Comment Written 15-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review, DJ. I really appreciate the generous stars and kind comments. I'm glad you liked this silly little piece. I hope you have a great day.
Comment from Raul1
This is a well written poem you have penned for the contest. I did enjoy reading your piece of poetry. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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This is a well written poem you have penned for the contest. I did enjoy reading your piece of poetry. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 14-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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Thank you for the great review, Raul. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
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You're welcome!
Comment from Chris Fruge
This was so great! I enjoyed the personification of the robot, the rhyme, and the brilliant play on words like "father ram away". There's nothing I'd change in this
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2021
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This was so great! I enjoyed the personification of the robot, the rhyme, and the brilliant play on words like "father ram away". There's nothing I'd change in this
Comment Written 13-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2021
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Thank you for the great review and giant sixer, Chris. Plus, glad to see you jumped on as a fan. I write a lot of silly stuff like this. I really appreciate the generous rating, friend. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a great day and thanks again.
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You?re welcome!
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
Fun stuff! This was the first entry I have read for this contest and it's a doozy. Some of the puns were so creative and imaginative. This made me smile several times. *smile* <-- see?
Just fun. Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2021
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Dear Mystery Writer,
Fun stuff! This was the first entry I have read for this contest and it's a doozy. Some of the puns were so creative and imaginative. This made me smile several times. *smile* <-- see?
Just fun. Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 13-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2021
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Thank you for the awesome review, Robyn. I'm glad you got a couple smiles out of this silliness. I hope you have a great day.