Heart Crafted Poems -2021
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Grandpa John"Musings of an old man -2021
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Comment from Goodadvicechan
we all grow old day by day. I like how you describe aging as
"His aged hands displayed the hard times worn by blisters turned to callouses, turned to hardened "leather-like..."
I like grandpa's prayers. It gives us hope in our daily life as he says:
"His supper prayers always spoken with such positive assurance that His God provided for his every means, while I sat watching, and a waitin' ... he - making certain gramma
got her share of the vittles --"
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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we all grow old day by day. I like how you describe aging as
"His aged hands displayed the hard times worn by blisters turned to callouses, turned to hardened "leather-like..."
I like grandpa's prayers. It gives us hope in our daily life as he says:
"His supper prayers always spoken with such positive assurance that His God provided for his every means, while I sat watching, and a waitin' ... he - making certain gramma
got her share of the vittles --"
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from equestrik
I do truly love this so much! I feel that you were fortunate to have this man as family and I especially like this line,: "Isn't it just a wonder ... just look around!"
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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I do truly love this so much! I feel that you were fortunate to have this man as family and I especially like this line,: "Isn't it just a wonder ... just look around!"
Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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Thank you I so much appreciate your kind remarks - It is wonderful! I hope your weekend is just supreme in every aspect.
Comment from Bill Schott
This free verse, Grandpa John, pays tribute to that figure in a young man's life who becomes the epitome of manhood and a head of one's heart and household.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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This free verse, Grandpa John, pays tribute to that figure in a young man's life who becomes the epitome of manhood and a head of one's heart and household.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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Bill, we who had have life lessons by grandparents are richly blessed by their wisdom. Have a splendid weekend.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Wonderful memories JLR and they sound just as vivid reading your lovely free verse tribute as they did to that 18-year-old boy who took hold of the flag. Thanks for sharing, it is important for us to share their memories.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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Wonderful memories JLR and they sound just as vivid reading your lovely free verse tribute as they did to that 18-year-old boy who took hold of the flag. Thanks for sharing, it is important for us to share their memories.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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Valda, thank you 🙏
Comment from tfawcus
A fine salute honouring a fine man, the sort of man it is a privilege to meet. There are more lessons to be learnt from a man such as this than one can find in any school. You really make him come to life in your poem. Much enjoyed.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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A fine salute honouring a fine man, the sort of man it is a privilege to meet. There are more lessons to be learnt from a man such as this than one can find in any school. You really make him come to life in your poem. Much enjoyed.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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Tony, thank you🙏
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Remember the life and joy of having a grandpa - I was eighteen when grandpa passed on ...
I stood man tall as I watched them --
ever so sacredly folded the flag into the symbolic tri-corned
shape -- thirteen times and then they laid that flag into my hand's.
Which I gripped vise-like and cried!
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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Remember the life and joy of having a grandpa - I was eighteen when grandpa passed on ...
I stood man tall as I watched them --
ever so sacredly folded the flag into the symbolic tri-corned
shape -- thirteen times and then they laid that flag into my hand's.
Which I gripped vise-like and cried!
Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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Iza, thank you🙏
Comment from juliaSjames
You paint a vivid word - portrait of your grandpa. Love and admiration shine through the lines. For it's evident your grandpa cared as deeply for you as you did for him.
Well composed prose poem that holds the reader's attention.
Best of luck in the contest.
Stay safe healthy and blessed
Julia
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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You paint a vivid word - portrait of your grandpa. Love and admiration shine through the lines. For it's evident your grandpa cared as deeply for you as you did for him.
Well composed prose poem that holds the reader's attention.
Best of luck in the contest.
Stay safe healthy and blessed
Julia
Comment Written 15-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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Julia, thank you🙏
Comment from R.E.R.
Well written and touching. My great grandfather passed away when I was too young to really talk to him, and recently I've been wishing I could. Thank you for sharing this.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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Well written and touching. My great grandfather passed away when I was too young to really talk to him, and recently I've been wishing I could. Thank you for sharing this.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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Thank you, so much!
Comment from Kerry L Batchelder
Beautiful story of your grandfather. So very well written. What a wonderful man. You were blessed indeed with such a man and you honor him very well with your writing. Great job!
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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Beautiful story of your grandfather. So very well written. What a wonderful man. You were blessed indeed with such a man and you honor him very well with your writing. Great job!
Comment Written 15-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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Kerry, thank you.
Comment from bhogg
I know that this was free verse, but to me to pace and cadence seemed so smooth, who would know? I enjoyed because I was so close to not only my grandparents, but some other folks so close to me. Well written and beautifully presented.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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I know that this was free verse, but to me to pace and cadence seemed so smooth, who would know? I enjoyed because I was so close to not only my grandparents, but some other folks so close to me. Well written and beautifully presented.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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Bhogg, thank you so much!