Daisy, The Digging Dog
The new dog at daycare longs for friends.7 total reviews
Comment from mobileliz
Good word choices. Shows that not everyone likes you no matter what you do, but many will like you for who you are. Teaches good values and might make a good children's picture book.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
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Good word choices. Shows that not everyone likes you no matter what you do, but many will like you for who you are. Teaches good values and might make a good children's picture book.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
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Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. I wish I could draw. :-) Hugs.
Comment from Wendy G
Lovely piece of writing, and with a message of encouragement and positive outlook as well. You have successfully used the letter D so very well in this delightful story. Definitely a winner in my eyes. (Sorry, I should have written more words with D in my review!)
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2021
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Lovely piece of writing, and with a message of encouragement and positive outlook as well. You have successfully used the letter D so very well in this delightful story. Definitely a winner in my eyes. (Sorry, I should have written more words with D in my review!)
Comment Written 13-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2021
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Don't be down on your dear self. Ha ha thank you so much for your review. It is greatly appreciated. Hugs to you.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading it. The letter 'd' is showcased well. I believe all kids will enjoy this both young and not so young. The image choice is perfect, too. Your story has a great teaching moment for kids, too--be your self and accept others and they will likely agree that you are a friend in waiting and become your friend.
Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2021
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You did a great job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading it. The letter 'd' is showcased well. I believe all kids will enjoy this both young and not so young. The image choice is perfect, too. Your story has a great teaching moment for kids, too--be your self and accept others and they will likely agree that you are a friend in waiting and become your friend.
Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 13-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Jan, for your encouraging review. This was a very fun prompt for me. Hugs.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello author of The new dog at daycare longs for friends.
about Daisy, The Digging Dog
I had to smile I had five dogs that love to dig and never knew what they were digging for
I was scratching my head wonder how I could say about your writing about Daisy that love to dig
Smiles I'm just going to copy of what you wrote in your ending
Daisy was deemed the "Digging Dog of Daycare." All the other dogs loved to dig with Daisy. Daisy always had a friend to dig with. Daisy's digging dreams developed into reality, and all Daisy had to do was be devoted to her Dalmatian-Doberman digging dog self.
Gert
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2021
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Hello author of The new dog at daycare longs for friends.
about Daisy, The Digging Dog
I had to smile I had five dogs that love to dig and never knew what they were digging for
I was scratching my head wonder how I could say about your writing about Daisy that love to dig
Smiles I'm just going to copy of what you wrote in your ending
Daisy was deemed the "Digging Dog of Daycare." All the other dogs loved to dig with Daisy. Daisy always had a friend to dig with. Daisy's digging dreams developed into reality, and all Daisy had to do was be devoted to her Dalmatian-Doberman digging dog self.
Gert
Comment Written 13-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Gert, for your review. Aren't digging dogs delightful? Hugs.
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You are welcome ?
Gert
Comment from Jay Squires
Well... let me see ... what letter did you choose to put particular emphasis on? LOL, a good job you did for the kiddies. I only found a few words that were chosen for their D sound that would have been beyond the child's understanding. But there were only a few, and the delightful plot made up for them.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Well... let me see ... what letter did you choose to put particular emphasis on? LOL, a good job you did for the kiddies. I only found a few words that were chosen for their D sound that would have been beyond the child's understanding. But there were only a few, and the delightful plot made up for them.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Thank you for your review. I considered the difficulty of the words, but I figured that's what their teacher or parents are for. Increasing vocabulary is important! Ha ha thanks again.
Comment from T B Botts
Well done. Who knew that so many words began with a "D" and you could compose a delightful story from them? If I had kids or grandkids here, I would love to share this story with them. Good luck in the contest.
Tom
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Well done. Who knew that so many words began with a "D" and you could compose a delightful story from them? If I had kids or grandkids here, I would love to share this story with them. Good luck in the contest.
Tom
Comment Written 13-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Thank you. I'm so sick of "D" words, I can't even begin to tell you. Ha ha your comments are a great complement. Humbly appreciated. Hugs.
Comment from tfawcus
Devastating discourse darned difficult to defeat. Definitely my declared darling at decision time. I don't know how you managed to keep this up for so long maintaining sense and story. Many congratulations!
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Devastating discourse darned difficult to defeat. Definitely my declared darling at decision time. I don't know how you managed to keep this up for so long maintaining sense and story. Many congratulations!
Comment Written 13-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Haha that review totally cracked me up! Thank you. I needed a laugh. I also so appreciate your encouragement and reading. Thank you again. Hugs.
