Heart Crafted Poems -2021
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Did you mean eighty-eight in your first line? This is a fine tribute to this lady who loved her flowers and was a keen gardener. I am sorry you lost a good friend here, her passion for flowers was brought alive in your write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Did you mean eighty-eight in your first line? This is a fine tribute to this lady who loved her flowers and was a keen gardener. I am sorry you lost a good friend here, her passion for flowers was brought alive in your write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Thanks Dolly, actually Billie was my sister-in-law who lost he husband New Year?s Day and now we celebrate their re-union.
Comment from mermaids
I can see this lady in her garden in the sky. There is a pleasant feeling as I read your words. The character of this lady who loved flowers and tended her garden, comes through clearly. Excellent free verse form that also tells a story.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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I can see this lady in her garden in the sky. There is a pleasant feeling as I read your words. The character of this lady who loved flowers and tended her garden, comes through clearly. Excellent free verse form that also tells a story.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much! Have a wonderful week.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
A grand tribute to a supreme gardener, I am sure. Whoever you are memorializing surely must have been a grand gardener. Flowers die and then they grow again. Perhaps, as we speak she is reappearing somewhere.
Ralf
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A grand tribute to a supreme gardener, I am sure. Whoever you are memorializing surely must have been a grand gardener. Flowers die and then they grow again. Perhaps, as we speak she is reappearing somewhere.
Ralf
Comment Written 13-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Ralf, for this I am certain. thank you!
Comment from Sharon Davis
A lovely free verse that responds to the writing prompt- flowers. The descriptive imagery both in the piem's body and the accompanying image have the reader detecting the smells of each of the blossoms listed. A beautiful spiritual work. Great job.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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A lovely free verse that responds to the writing prompt- flowers. The descriptive imagery both in the piem's body and the accompanying image have the reader detecting the smells of each of the blossoms listed. A beautiful spiritual work. Great job.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Sharon thank you, it was "fresh in my memory" and soothing to share today.
Comment from Boogienights
This is so beautiful, each descriptive word brings my mom to mind. She loved flowers and plants so much. All I have to do is smell lilacs and she comes back to me. Thanks so much for sharing this lovely poem. :)
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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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This is so beautiful, each descriptive word brings my mom to mind. She loved flowers and plants so much. All I have to do is smell lilacs and she comes back to me. Thanks so much for sharing this lovely poem. :)
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Comment Written 13-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Boogienights .. I appreciate so much your comments and I delight that I was able to share this and create this memory.
Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
Well you made the smell of flowers so realistic, I started sneezing after I read your poem! lol It was very well done - very well described - a beautiful free verse poem. I enjoy reading free verse because I find it hard to write and I admire when it's done well.
Well done!
Susan
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Well you made the smell of flowers so realistic, I started sneezing after I read your poem! lol It was very well done - very well described - a beautiful free verse poem. I enjoy reading free verse because I find it hard to write and I admire when it's done well.
Well done!
Susan
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Comment Written 13-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Susan, thank you, so much! This was "fresh in my memory" and soothing to share today.
