Machines Rule
Robots defeated humanity.3 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello author of Robots defeated humanity.
Machines Rule
No way they will defeat humanity. Robots do not love. God created us with the capacity to love. Love is based upon one's right to choose to love. We cannot force others to love us. We can make them serve us or obey us. But true love is founded upon one's freedom to choose to respond.
Billy Graham
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Hello author of Robots defeated humanity.
Machines Rule
No way they will defeat humanity. Robots do not love. God created us with the capacity to love. Love is based upon one's right to choose to love. We cannot force others to love us. We can make them serve us or obey us. But true love is founded upon one's freedom to choose to respond.
Billy Graham
Comment Written 13-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Thank you!
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You are welcome unknown writer
Comment from Carla M Horne
A warning to children is a strong beginning, but some of the fear is lost along the way. I wonder what happened to the wife, and if some of the end rhymes are a little too forced. I like how the robots are doing to humanity what man tried to do to them. What goes around, comes around. Great image for the poem!
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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A warning to children is a strong beginning, but some of the fear is lost along the way. I wonder what happened to the wife, and if some of the end rhymes are a little too forced. I like how the robots are doing to humanity what man tried to do to them. What goes around, comes around. Great image for the poem!
Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Sharon Davis
Your poem responds well to the writing prompt, robots versus humans. The perspective conveys a message of robots overtaking human power. Well presented.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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Your poem responds well to the writing prompt, robots versus humans. The perspective conveys a message of robots overtaking human power. Well presented.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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Thank you!
