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Sunnilicious' NaPoWriMo, April 2021

Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Elliott Bay, Seattle, WA"
National Poetry Writing Month, Annual Event

5 total reviews 
Comment from CheyLGwriter
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I have never been to Seattle. However, in this poem I feel I have a view into what it's like. I don't know if I could deal with that much rain. I really enjoyed reading this piece. It's always great to have favorite writers, and you are one of mine. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
    Thank you :)
Comment from royowen
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There's something really marvellous about a boat haven or a place where they're docked is still quite a romantic approach, you've written a very nicely rhymed three stanza poem, well done Alicia, beautifully written, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
    Thank you :)
Comment from lyenochka
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Loved the video - sure got my cat's attention!
You must be a born traveler. I enjoyed your tour of Seattle, the rains, the crocuses and those strange-looking geoduck clams! You appealed to all our senses of sight, smells, tastes, and sounds!

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
    I lived in Seattle from 2006 to 2014. I moved after my first Masters degree for work. Not sure how my life fell apart. Thank you :)
Comment from AnnaLinda
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Sunni,

Please excuse me for reviewing from my phone, but I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem about Seattle. You've got so much wonderful imagery in this. I read your poem to my husband who is not into poetry...lol

I love your video of that singing bird also. He's still singing now.

Other than the rain...Seattle must be a beautiful place.

Thanks for sharing,

AnnaLinda


 Comment Written 12-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
    I lived in Seattle for 7 or 8 years. I live in California now.Thank you :)
Comment from Irish Rain
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How I loved that area!!
I lived in Tacoma, and I so miss
the ocean and the rain.
I love the way your words
bring it all back.
Beautiful Miss Alicia!!
Blessings...

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
    I lived between Elliot Bay and the Seattle Center for 7 years. I only went to Tacoma for the airport, SeaTac. Thank you :)
reply by Irish Rain on 20-Aug-2022
    Wonderful!!!