Sunnilicious' NaPoWriMo, April 2021
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Hold Faith"National Poetry Writing Month, Annual Event
6 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I think we can't always identify happiness but we know instantly when we are unhappy and hope is our only friend as we see our life dissolve otherwise, wise words here Alicia, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
  |
I think we can't always identify happiness but we know instantly when we are unhappy and hope is our only friend as we see our life dissolve otherwise, wise words here Alicia, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
-
Thank you :)
Comment from Kerry L Batchelder
I see the message is yo hold on to our faith in God. I agree. Unhappiness is not always known or understood by others but God knows our hearts and understands us. Well written.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
|
I see the message is yo hold on to our faith in God. I agree. Unhappiness is not always known or understood by others but God knows our hearts and understands us. Well written.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
-
Thank you :)
Comment from AnnaLinda
Wow! Sunni!
This is a powerful poem! Powerful message!
What an amazing nonet you have composed
I doubt it gets much better than this.
Loved these lines...although, all of your
lines melded together so well.
"Because nobody listens
Or the truth is denied"
Super presentation as well,
Anna
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
|
Wow! Sunni!
This is a powerful poem! Powerful message!
What an amazing nonet you have composed
I doubt it gets much better than this.
Loved these lines...although, all of your
lines melded together so well.
"Because nobody listens
Or the truth is denied"
Super presentation as well,
Anna
Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
-
Thank you :)
Comment from Bill Schott
This nonet, Hold Faith, has the proper nine to one descending syllable formatting and reminds the reader that we can always direct our thoughts to God, when no one else seems to listen.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
|
This nonet, Hold Faith, has the proper nine to one descending syllable formatting and reminds the reader that we can always direct our thoughts to God, when no one else seems to listen.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2022
-
Thank you :)
Comment from royowen
Oh yes, indeed, there is a region that human understanding can never except, the fact that God interacts with His creation, us, to produce evidence of His existence...if we listen! Well done, good going Alicia, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
|
Oh yes, indeed, there is a region that human understanding can never except, the fact that God interacts with His creation, us, to produce evidence of His existence...if we listen! Well done, good going Alicia, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
-
Thank you
God bless you :)
-
And you Alicia
Comment from lyenochka
What a great message in your nonet poem! There are always times of difficulty and trials. But God is always there to listen and He will help us deal with those hard things.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
|
What a great message in your nonet poem! There are always times of difficulty and trials. But God is always there to listen and He will help us deal with those hard things.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
-
Thank you
God bless you :)