Be You
A poem31 total reviews
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
I do find myself trying to write like others, but hope I will at some point in my life develop my own style. Better hurry, I don't have much time left. =] Encouraging words.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
I do find myself trying to write like others, but hope I will at some point in my life develop my own style. Better hurry, I don't have much time left. =] Encouraging words.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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I'm glad you enjoyed my poem and the encouragement within. Do be yourself. Your Snoopy-loving self. Sending along my very best, Sally 😘🌺
Comment from Kit Nongkhlaw
Wow! Great!! So many of us copied from others or wanted to be like them. God has created us so distinct and unique. I like the words, Just be you,
'cause real should do, true beauty from your pen. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
Wow! Great!! So many of us copied from others or wanted to be like them. God has created us so distinct and unique. I like the words, Just be you,
'cause real should do, true beauty from your pen. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much for the lovely review of my poem. I do hope you be yourself. Sending love my very best to you and yours, Sally 😎🌻
Comment from damommy
Excellent advice. I'd find it hard if not impossible to be anyone but myself. I learned a long time ago to not let what others think bother me too much. People can be so unkind, especially when one puts out writing from their heart.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
Excellent advice. I'd find it hard if not impossible to be anyone but myself. I learned a long time ago to not let what others think bother me too much. People can be so unkind, especially when one puts out writing from their heart.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much for your kind review of my phone. I'm glad you found it encouraging and helpful. Sending along my very best, Sally 😎🌺💕
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Sally, a good poem, well metered, wise words of advice and well displayed. In other words an overall well written poem. You did well with this poem and I agree with point of view completely. Warm regards - love Dorothy xxx
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
Hello Sally, a good poem, well metered, wise words of advice and well displayed. In other words an overall well written poem. You did well with this poem and I agree with point of view completely. Warm regards - love Dorothy xxx
Comment Written 15-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much for your lovely review and kind comments. Sending along my very best to you and yours, dear Dorothy.
Sal 😘🌺❤️
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
I love it. That should be front and center for everyone. No better person to be, than oneself.
"Just give 'em you,
to self be true,
Authenticity..." That's all that's needed.
Ralf
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
I love it. That should be front and center for everyone. No better person to be, than oneself.
"Just give 'em you,
to self be true,
Authenticity..." That's all that's needed.
Ralf
Comment Written 15-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much for the wonderful video and compliments, dear. It is so appreciated. Sending along my very best, Sally 🌼🌸
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
Interesting poem. I agree. Roses should try to be roses and lavenders should remain lavenders. Can't imagine what will happen if they imitate each other. The world is big enough to accommodate everyone. I enjoyed your poem. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
Interesting poem. I agree. Roses should try to be roses and lavenders should remain lavenders. Can't imagine what will happen if they imitate each other. The world is big enough to accommodate everyone. I enjoyed your poem. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 15-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much for the lovely review and encouragement. Sending along my very best, Sally 🌼🌸
Comment from Susan Newell
Sally, you have expressed the heart of a true poet. Brave writers color outside the lines and don't worry about the naysayers. Usually there will be someone who truly understands and enjoys the creation. As they used to say in the sixties, "Different strokes for different folks." I think that is especially true for strokes of the pen. Nothing is more boring than absolute conformity. None of this means that every poem or piece of prose is great and shouldn't be open to constructive suggestions. But even those suggestions should be tested for merit.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
Sally, you have expressed the heart of a true poet. Brave writers color outside the lines and don't worry about the naysayers. Usually there will be someone who truly understands and enjoys the creation. As they used to say in the sixties, "Different strokes for different folks." I think that is especially true for strokes of the pen. Nothing is more boring than absolute conformity. None of this means that every poem or piece of prose is great and shouldn't be open to constructive suggestions. But even those suggestions should be tested for merit.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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thank you very much for the lovely review and comments. Thank you for taking the time to read and always stopping by with a kind of you. Sending along my very best, Sally 🌷💐
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You are welcome.
Comment from Ric Myworld
I'm not sure any of us are our true selves all the time, trying to keep a stiff upper lip, or smile away the tears. Although, many like me, couldn't be anyone else even if they wanted to, or not for long. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
I'm not sure any of us are our true selves all the time, trying to keep a stiff upper lip, or smile away the tears. Although, many like me, couldn't be anyone else even if they wanted to, or not for long. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and comments. I'm so glad you were able to stop by today. But I think they always, Sally 😎🌴
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Absolutely! Those are the perfect words to lift someone out of the gloom that can sometimes fall over a writer. Just write what comes from within you. I like this one, Sal, a perfect choice of words wrapped in a perfect format. Well done! :)) Sandra xx
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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
Absolutely! Those are the perfect words to lift someone out of the gloom that can sometimes fall over a writer. Just write what comes from within you. I like this one, Sal, a perfect choice of words wrapped in a perfect format. Well done! :)) Sandra xx
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Comment Written 15-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much for the lovely review and kind compliments, dear Sandra. It is so appreciated. I'm glad it encouraged you. Sending along my very best, Sally 💕🌸🌺
Comment from Begin Again
Bravo and a big thank you attached to a bigger hug. I really needed to be reminded of this, because since returning to writing myself, I've been directed in so many directions I almost said it wasn't worth it. It's no one's fault but my own because as you say I wasn't being true to myself. We should listen, consider and then adapt if we please.... Loved the poem and thanks for the gentle reminder. Smiles and best wishes for a wonderful day. Always, Carol
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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
Bravo and a big thank you attached to a bigger hug. I really needed to be reminded of this, because since returning to writing myself, I've been directed in so many directions I almost said it wasn't worth it. It's no one's fault but my own because as you say I wasn't being true to myself. We should listen, consider and then adapt if we please.... Loved the poem and thanks for the gentle reminder. Smiles and best wishes for a wonderful day. Always, Carol
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Comment Written 15-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much for the lovely review and kind compliments, dear Carol. I'm glad you I'm gonna get you early on with us and were able to give you a good guidance. It is so important that we be ourselves and let God use this in a special way. You are so very special I wouldn't want to be anyone else. Sending you my very best, Sally 💕😘🌸🌺
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Thank you, Sally. Sending you all my smiles and hugs, Carol