Summer Heat
Haiku Club23 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Straw hats and lots of water too is what is needed on those hot, steamy days. With the colours you've chosen it gives off a feeling of heat before even reading your lovely haiku Yvonne. Nicely done,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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Straw hats and lots of water too is what is needed on those hot, steamy days. With the colours you've chosen it gives off a feeling of heat before even reading your lovely haiku Yvonne. Nicely done,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2021
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I dread summer so much! Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
In some states like Arizona and Texas, this would resonate. The sizzling sun pushing the temperatures up over the one hundred mark. But, here in Ontario, we love the warmth.
Ralf
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2021
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In some states like Arizona and Texas, this would resonate. The sizzling sun pushing the temperatures up over the one hundred mark. But, here in Ontario, we love the warmth.
Ralf
Comment Written 14-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2021
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Here in Arkansas it gets pretty hot, too. The humidity is the worst. Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Sally Law
A wonderful summer haiku and so reminiscent of Florida. We've already had temps in the mid-nineties. We are in our straw hats. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the Haiku challenge,
Sal XOs....
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2021
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A wonderful summer haiku and so reminiscent of Florida. We've already had temps in the mid-nineties. We are in our straw hats. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the Haiku challenge,
Sal XOs....
Comment Written 14-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2021
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That hot already! Ugh! 8-). Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Summer Heat
by damommy
I love your summer haiku! Good syllables count and connection between lines. Beautiful presentation and imagery. Well done :)
Gypsy
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2021
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Summer Heat
by damommy
I love your summer haiku! Good syllables count and connection between lines. Beautiful presentation and imagery. Well done :)
Gypsy
Comment Written 14-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Ulla
Hi Yvonne, this is a great haiku for the club. I'm yearning for some heat. Please do send some my way. You have two grammatically connected lines, and a great satori. The kigo is clearly that of summer. All best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Hi Yvonne, this is a great haiku for the club. I'm yearning for some heat. Please do send some my way. You have two grammatically connected lines, and a great satori. The kigo is clearly that of summer. All best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 13-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Thank you. I'd be glad to send all the summer your way. I hate summer.
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Right! I love late spring, summer and early autumn, but I hate winter. We have mild winters where I live, and often very mild days in the lower seventies. but hitting the fifties and I hate it. Hehe
Comment from aryr
This was great Yvonne. I loved the picture and your words. They did a fantastic job of implying warmth. Very well done. We could definitely use some warmth around here, we have white stuff yesterday and today. Brrr.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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This was great Yvonne. I loved the picture and your words. They did a fantastic job of implying warmth. Very well done. We could definitely use some warmth around here, we have white stuff yesterday and today. Brrr.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Thank you. I'm never ready for summer. We could chop off that part of the calendar as far as I'm concerned. lol.
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LOL, well I will just take summer for you. You are so welcome Yvonne.
Comment from Pantygynt
A slightly numerous look at what we are all waiting for as the temperature struggles to clime into double figures. I am sick of hearing the meteorologists telling us it is cold - we know that. I want them to do something about it. Lol.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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A slightly numerous look at what we are all waiting for as the temperature struggles to clime into double figures. I am sick of hearing the meteorologists telling us it is cold - we know that. I want them to do something about it. Lol.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Absolutely. Thank you. I'm trying to get summer boycotted. It's too hot and humid here. lol.
Comment from June Sargent
They say this year will be a season of increased hurricanes. I have a feeling it is going to be a long, hot summer. Your poem might reflect what we will all feel in a couple of months! I will enjoy spring for now...
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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They say this year will be a season of increased hurricanes. I have a feeling it is going to be a long, hot summer. Your poem might reflect what we will all feel in a couple of months! I will enjoy spring for now...
Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Thank you. I can't enjoy spring for dreading summer.
Comment from Boogienights
That's summer for you. I love the sun, but we have to be careful of skin cancer...that being said, the sun is glorious and your poem and picture shows that eloquently. Thank you for sharing. :)
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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That's summer for you. I love the sun, but we have to be careful of skin cancer...that being said, the sun is glorious and your poem and picture shows that eloquently. Thank you for sharing. :)
Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great haiku, Yvonne. You handled the prompt and the style well. The picture is perfect. Even without a picture, your words paint their own picture for readers. I need a straw hat with a built in air conditioner. You have the format of haiku perfectly. The color scheme even looks hot to me--bring on Fall ! I love the ~ .
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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This is a great haiku, Yvonne. You handled the prompt and the style well. The picture is perfect. Even without a picture, your words paint their own picture for readers. I need a straw hat with a built in air conditioner. You have the format of haiku perfectly. The color scheme even looks hot to me--bring on Fall ! I love the ~ .
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much for reviewing and for your help!
