Comment from equestrik

Excellent

Awe-this is a cleverly written little poem which brought me an early orning smile! I love the innocence in it--as well as the truth of the fact that her worries were over!

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2021

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Haha what a fun poem. Hopefully mom was in a good mood when you told her. Also, maybe dad didn't like the vase much. I enjoyed reading and reviewing your poem.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021

Hello Jan: I thank you for your review. You are appreciated. Jan, Mom is NOT, going to be in a good mood after hearing that I just broke her favorite vase. Dad? Well...he's not really crazy about Mom's vase...but on the other hand...he's crazy about Mom. So...what ever gets Mom upset...gets Dad all bent out of shape...and, "PEED," with who ever got her upset. When that, "Who ever," is me....well...like I said, Jan. I thank you for your review, my friend. God bless you. cordially: rhonnie69.

Comment from T B Botts

Excellent

Hey Rhonnie,
This is a funny poem, good job. I guess if you don't own anything, you don't have to worry about taking care of anything. The opposite is true as well, the more you have, the more you have to take care of. I loved the simplicity of this poem, very original and funny. Well done.

Tom

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2021