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a poem

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Comment from 4theloveoftrees
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Awww, I can imagine you miss your cabin very much, I would too!! I hope you are able to return soon! This is a lovely entry for the contest and speaks to your sadness and longing for the cabin you love!

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2021
    Thanks for the thoughtful review. I hope maybe end of summer. Wish you the best today, cheers, j
Comment from Wendy G
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A very well-written reflective poem, brought up to date by the contrast with the present day border restrictions compared with the freedom to travel of past times. Best wishes for this entry.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2021
    Thanks for the review Wendy. I hope maybe end of summer.
    Have a great day, j
Comment from Badger_29
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Hey Jude story I've seen you on here for quite some time this was funnier is that it matched the criteria quite well. I've never been to Vermont but I hear they have good maple syrup though. A great subject talking about the past and watering holes, brings a bit of nostalgia myself as I grew up in California and Wyoming. Enjoy this piece, a pleasure and an honor to write with you here.

Blessings,

Brother Badger Cull

Darren

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2021
    Thanks for the thoughtful review.
    Vermont is pretty special.
    I look forward to sharing our stories,
    have a great day, j
Comment from T B Botts
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This is a nice poem. I didn't really understand the meaning until I read the explanation underneath and then it all came together for me. I didn't realize that Canada had such severe restrictions. Personally, I think this who Covid thing has served to empower the governments of the world at the expense of the governed. Hope you can return to your life soon.
Blessings.

Tom

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2021
    Thanks for the thoughtful review, cheers, j
Comment from padumachitta
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Hey There

It's such a pain this dang virus. It's weird not to be able to just go a few miles.
However, you did get a good poem out of it.

We are facing another hard lockdown here...oh well, it'll keep the tourists out of the woods...

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
    Thanks for the thoughtful review. Yeah, it is starting to get to me, especially with the warm weather. I am getting an electric bike so I can scoot around the lake while I wait for the border to open.
    Have a great weekend, cheers, j
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Your message comes through clearly in your poem, Judester. I enjoyed reading it. I can feel the emotion and longing of what once but now has changed. Your words flow smoothly with great imagery,
Thanks for participating.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
    Thanks for the encouraging review. Yeah, everything will be okay, have a great weekend, cheers, j
Comment from lyenochka
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I remember your stories about your adventure days sailing and traveling! I am guessing when you are comparing the "county fairs" to the "county lines," the latter refers to the borders? I do hope they open the borders soon! Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
    Thanks for the review. I changed county fair to summer fair so I do not repeat. I guess that the country line and county line would run parallel.
    Canada and US have longest peaceful border in the world, yay.
    Thanks for your insightful reviews and have a great weekend, cheers, j