Sunnilicious' NaPoWriMo, April 2021
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Jeannie Djeen In A Lamp"National Poetry Writing Month, Annual Event
4 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought you wrote a creative poem. I like the descriptions in each stanza. The one about the woman whistling at the men - well that was different! Very creative and enjoyable poem.
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I thought you wrote a creative poem. I like the descriptions in each stanza. The one about the woman whistling at the men - well that was different! Very creative and enjoyable poem.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2021
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Jeannie Djeen In A Lamp, brings that cloistered character up for air in an attempt to free him/herself from the well-rubbed vessel.
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This poem, Jeannie Djeen In A Lamp, brings that cloistered character up for air in an attempt to free him/herself from the well-rubbed vessel.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
Comment from royowen
A nicely written one - a - day poetic April. This beautifully scribed poem, eloquent and smooth, and that typically written Alicia style work that is in that enchanting style and distinct way, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : You can't buy me a(nd) place upon the pedestal.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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A nicely written one - a - day poetic April. This beautifully scribed poem, eloquent and smooth, and that typically written Alicia style work that is in that enchanting style and distinct way, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : You can't buy me a(nd) place upon the pedestal.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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Hi Roy! Great edit note. I rarely proof my work. Thank you :)
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Well done
Comment from lyenochka
I like the personality that you gave the Jeannie! She sounds like she's really curious about our modern world. But she might cause some havoc if you let her out. That lamp is so gorgeous! Mine is a brass one that really needs polishing but I don't want to let the genie out. Lol.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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I like the personality that you gave the Jeannie! She sounds like she's really curious about our modern world. But she might cause some havoc if you let her out. That lamp is so gorgeous! Mine is a brass one that really needs polishing but I don't want to let the genie out. Lol.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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Hi Rebecca! Brass sounds like an original cast oil lamp. This one is little like llike 1-1/2 to 2-inches and it's metal dipped in silver, which sturdy for burning cones. Thank you :)