Life Before the Mast
A Lauranelle for Potlatch Poetry52 total reviews
Comment from royowen
I remember as a boy longing for a life at sea, but I was in love with the danger that seas afford to those foolish enough to embrace the "adventure", I never did "go to sea" the closest I came was rowing a a boat on the local river. (A bit more than that really) a beautifully written Lauranelle Yvonne, a version of the villanelle. Well done, a great job, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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I remember as a boy longing for a life at sea, but I was in love with the danger that seas afford to those foolish enough to embrace the "adventure", I never did "go to sea" the closest I came was rowing a a boat on the local river. (A bit more than that really) a beautifully written Lauranelle Yvonne, a version of the villanelle. Well done, a great job, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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Thank you for this lovely review.
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Most welcome
Comment from Mary Vigasin
This is a well written poem of men and the sea.
You give your reader a picture of these old salts and the sea.
I enjoyed the read.
Good luck in the contest.
Regards
Mary
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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This is a well written poem of men and the sea.
You give your reader a picture of these old salts and the sea.
I enjoyed the read.
Good luck in the contest.
Regards
Mary
Comment Written 10-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Cogitator
A life well-lived can only be decided by the one living it. My father was a simple man, but he had the crust of experience. I would have the same respect for the subject of your poem as I have for my dear departed dad...Great work!! ...John
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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A life well-lived can only be decided by the one living it. My father was a simple man, but he had the crust of experience. I would have the same respect for the subject of your poem as I have for my dear departed dad...Great work!! ...John
Comment Written 10-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much for this.
Comment from aryr
Good luck in the FUN! FUN! FUN! writing prompt entry, Yvonne. This was so very true to read. I loved the rhyme pattern and the picture was perfect. Your words were fun to read but they still maintained a depth of truth. It seems once caught by the sea/ocean one never turns back-grumbles a lot but never gives it up. Well done.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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Good luck in the FUN! FUN! FUN! writing prompt entry, Yvonne. This was so very true to read. I loved the rhyme pattern and the picture was perfect. Your words were fun to read but they still maintained a depth of truth. It seems once caught by the sea/ocean one never turns back-grumbles a lot but never gives it up. Well done.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much!
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You are so welcome Yvonne.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
A very humming poem. I see the explanation of its form and truth be told I do not understand it. However, you seem to and in doing so have rendered a lovely poem.
Ralf
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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A very humming poem. I see the explanation of its form and truth be told I do not understand it. However, you seem to and in doing so have rendered a lovely poem.
Ralf
Comment Written 10-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
My, What a picture and poem, Yvonne.
I think you have done yourself proud my dear.
I could smell the sea salt. This is an excellent entry. Well done. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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My, What a picture and poem, Yvonne.
I think you have done yourself proud my dear.
I could smell the sea salt. This is an excellent entry. Well done. Nancy:)
Comment Written 10-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much for this lovely review!
Comment from robyn corum
Yvonne,
hahahaha This was fun, indeed. Grumble, grumble, grumble. And yet, he'd do it all again. That sounds like a lot of the old men I know. hahaha I enjoyed this a lot - I'm smiling right now. haha
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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Yvonne,
hahahaha This was fun, indeed. Grumble, grumble, grumble. And yet, he'd do it all again. That sounds like a lot of the old men I know. hahaha I enjoyed this a lot - I'm smiling right now. haha
Comment Written 10-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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I'm glad it made you smile. Thank you so much for reviewing.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting and very well written poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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This is a very interesting and very well written poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 10-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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I'm glad. Thank you, Teri.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It is a joy to read a skilfully written poem with great rhymes and metre, whatever you did to the form did not spoil the flow and your subject matter is interesting, a hard life can be fruitful, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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It is a joy to read a skilfully written poem with great rhymes and metre, whatever you did to the form did not spoil the flow and your subject matter is interesting, a hard life can be fruitful, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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Thank you. I'm glad you like it.
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
I am ignorant of the various styles of poetry you have mentioned. But I enjoyed reading it. A new experience for me.It is unique and has interesting use of metaphors. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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I am ignorant of the various styles of poetry you have mentioned. But I enjoyed reading it. A new experience for me.It is unique and has interesting use of metaphors. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 10-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much.
