My Night In Jail
Mirror Story contest entry4 total reviews
Comment from writer723
This is an interesting story. It has a twist ending with the guy being told it wasn't worth the gas money invested in the trip. I did find the part about the mirror over the head humorous.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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This is an interesting story. It has a twist ending with the guy being told it wasn't worth the gas money invested in the trip. I did find the part about the mirror over the head humorous.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Writer723. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Ha, ha, ha this is a very funny story:"
The guy at the table next to me, who just found out his hideous vase was worth twenty thousand dollars, mockingly said, "Hey, I'll give you ten bucks for it."
I picked up the mirror, went over to" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest, I'm sold:)
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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Ha, ha, ha this is a very funny story:"
The guy at the table next to me, who just found out his hideous vase was worth twenty thousand dollars, mockingly said, "Hey, I'll give you ten bucks for it."
I picked up the mirror, went over to" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest, I'm sold:)
Comment Written 09-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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Thank you for the fantastic review and generous stars, Iza. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silly piece.
Comment from Leann DS
Ha ha Ha funny! You got a chuckle or two out of me. Nice take on the "mirror "topic. It was not what I expected. Well written and concise, and I did not notice any typos. Hooray! Well done. Hugs.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2021
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Ha ha Ha funny! You got a chuckle or two out of me. Nice take on the "mirror "topic. It was not what I expected. Well written and concise, and I did not notice any typos. Hooray! Well done. Hugs.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2021
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Leann. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness. Have yourself a great weekend.
Comment from lancellot
Well, that explains the night in jail. Honestly, this is structurally well written. I see nothing that needs editing, good job. Now, I do not see any humor in this. I would recommend just changing this to general fiction. But, that is only my opinion, perhaps criminal assault is funny to some.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2021
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Well, that explains the night in jail. Honestly, this is structurally well written. I see nothing that needs editing, good job. Now, I do not see any humor in this. I would recommend just changing this to general fiction. But, that is only my opinion, perhaps criminal assault is funny to some.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2021
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Thank you for the great review, lancellot. Yeah, seeing it as all just being fiction, I was going at it in sort of a Tom and Jerry criminal assault kind of way. I'm sure a lot of folks didn't really find those two as humorous as I did either. I really appreciate the stars, L. Thank you again.
