Day Deepens Into Dusk
Unrhymed Tercet26 total reviews
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine haiku, Gypsy--I heard that crows are very intelligent creatures, so I can relate to them! They've been observed dropping nuts off an overpass so the passing cards drive over them in break the shells; what I read, anyway
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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Another fine haiku, Gypsy--I heard that crows are very intelligent creatures, so I can relate to them! They've been observed dropping nuts off an overpass so the passing cards drive over them in break the shells; what I read, anyway
Comment Written 07-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much for reviewing my poem.
Gypsy
Comment from Ulla
Awe, Marival, I really liked this wonderful tercet poem of yours.The imagery is outstanding but I loved the last line how they yearned for a haiku poem. Wonderful!! Ulla xx
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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Awe, Marival, I really liked this wonderful tercet poem of yours.The imagery is outstanding but I loved the last line how they yearned for a haiku poem. Wonderful!! Ulla xx
Comment Written 07-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much for reviewing my poem, Ulla. I hope you are well. Abrazos.
Gypsy
Comment from Bluesatinbutterfly
Beautifully written and the art work supports your words as if destined for that role. What a wonderful framework in which place your thoughts. Thank you.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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Beautifully written and the art work supports your words as if destined for that role. What a wonderful framework in which place your thoughts. Thank you.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much for reviewing my poem.
Gypsy
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It was my pleasure.
Comment from Mark D. R.
GBR,
Caw - caw - caw the Haiku poet writes an interesting post as the crows await the fading light. It is a somber feeling one gets from your illustration and verse.
The three line Tercet can be written as 5-7-5, but yours is not.
Mark
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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GBR,
Caw - caw - caw the Haiku poet writes an interesting post as the crows await the fading light. It is a somber feeling one gets from your illustration and verse.
The three line Tercet can be written as 5-7-5, but yours is not.
Mark
Comment Written 07-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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The tercet doesn't have a syllable restriction. The definition by the Poetry Foundation is: A poetic unit of three lines, rhymed or unrhymed. source poetry foundation.org
Thank you for the review
Comment from lyenochka
Your poem makes me smile thinking of you and your busy days. Then when it's evening and those last glimmers of light fade, your muse inspires you to write your haiku!
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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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Your poem makes me smile thinking of you and your busy days. Then when it's evening and those last glimmers of light fade, your muse inspires you to write your haiku!
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Comment Written 07-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much, Helen. I usually write my haiku in the morning or afternoon and never after 9 pm.
gypsy hugs :)
Comment from royowen
I like that, the crows have obvious shortcomings concerning the writing of poetry, besides having no digital dexterity in writing, uneducated, they would need a Scribble to write their edicts, well done Gypsy, great write, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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I like that, the crows have obvious shortcomings concerning the writing of poetry, besides having no digital dexterity in writing, uneducated, they would need a Scribble to write their edicts, well done Gypsy, great write, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 07-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much, Roy. I appreciate your review.
Gypsy
