The Walkers
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Comment from nancy_e_davis
I am very happy to see another Gabriel Hope story.
I always enjoy them and You can count on me as a reviewer as long as I am able. Human trafficking's a horrible crime and is worth pursuing and destroying. Write on Mike! Nancy:)
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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I am very happy to see another Gabriel Hope story.
I always enjoy them and You can count on me as a reviewer as long as I am able. Human trafficking's a horrible crime and is worth pursuing and destroying. Write on Mike! Nancy:)
Comment Written 20-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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Hi, Nancy. We have a long journey ahead. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from estory
I think you have a great premise for this story, and an imaginative twist to the characters involved as you bring angels from heaven and seem to cast them as regular people here, taking their coffee before they go on their mission. It creates a very human, a very approachable, touch to the story. It is very much like the old Highway to Heaven series from Michael Landon. The opening scene when the sex slave trader is buying the young girl from her own father is very heartbreaking. You really have an uncomfortable scene there that stirs up our compassion and sets the scene for the intervention to come. estory
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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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I think you have a great premise for this story, and an imaginative twist to the characters involved as you bring angels from heaven and seem to cast them as regular people here, taking their coffee before they go on their mission. It creates a very human, a very approachable, touch to the story. It is very much like the old Highway to Heaven series from Michael Landon. The opening scene when the sex slave trader is buying the young girl from her own father is very heartbreaking. You really have an uncomfortable scene there that stirs up our compassion and sets the scene for the intervention to come. estory
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Comment Written 20-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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Hello, my friend. I think Angels are an important part of our lives, but we don't know it. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Poor girl, sold as meat, and just for breeding purposes. Finally, the Archanels are taking a stand:""Just what is the mission, Michael?" Gabriel asks.
"Our mission is in India. It will be a long journey through the Spirit Realm into the poorest part of the country. Evil is truly breeding there."
"In what ways?" Pete asks.
"The evil one is buying young girls from the slave market in Bihar and breeding them with Legions and Familiars. Satan is trying to create a race of super demons. Do you remember studying the Watchers from the days of Jared?"
Thank you for sharing and good luck withy the next chapter.
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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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Poor girl, sold as meat, and just for breeding purposes. Finally, the Archanels are taking a stand:""Just what is the mission, Michael?" Gabriel asks.
"Our mission is in India. It will be a long journey through the Spirit Realm into the poorest part of the country. Evil is truly breeding there."
"In what ways?" Pete asks.
"The evil one is buying young girls from the slave market in Bihar and breeding them with Legions and Familiars. Satan is trying to create a race of super demons. Do you remember studying the Watchers from the days of Jared?"
Thank you for sharing and good luck withy the next chapter.
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Comment Written 20-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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Hi, Iza. That prologue was the most disgusting thing I've ever written. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
