The Walkers
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Gabriel is recruited."The Final Gabriel Hope Journey
13 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
It's hard to imagine that there are still places like Bihar in the world. But there are forms of slavery in many places, including Africa that, are as prevalent as ever. Okay, I'm back to catching up. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2021
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It's hard to imagine that there are still places like Bihar in the world. But there are forms of slavery in many places, including Africa that, are as prevalent as ever. Okay, I'm back to catching up. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2021
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Thanks again, Ric!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Bill Schott
This looks like the beginning to a great story of some angelic brawling that will take place, perhaps, in the subcontinent and involving miss Prisha.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2021
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This looks like the beginning to a great story of some angelic brawling that will take place, perhaps, in the subcontinent and involving miss Prisha.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2021
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Hi, Bill. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from LJbutterfly
I'm inspired already. I enjoy reading stories where the Holy Spirit triumphs over evil. The prologue was captivating but difficult to read. I had to pause several times. Chapter 1 was a relief. This story is beautifully written with authentic dialogue and concise narrative. The subject is horrifying, but I'm going on the journey with Gabriel and Michael.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2021
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I'm inspired already. I enjoy reading stories where the Holy Spirit triumphs over evil. The prologue was captivating but difficult to read. I had to pause several times. Chapter 1 was a relief. This story is beautifully written with authentic dialogue and concise narrative. The subject is horrifying, but I'm going on the journey with Gabriel and Michael.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2021
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from mobileliz
Good flow, good writing skills, nice dialog. Very educational about a non-Christian culture and what happens to the expendable sex. I gather the girl will be instrumental in the take-down.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2021
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Good flow, good writing skills, nice dialog. Very educational about a non-Christian culture and what happens to the expendable sex. I gather the girl will be instrumental in the take-down.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2021
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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You're welcome. God Bless
Comment from BethShelby
This should be interesting. I look forward to reading it. Human trafficking is a horrible thing. I hate to think about what happen when innocent children become the victims. I enjoyed the prologue and first chapter and I'll try to read this book as you write it.
Beth
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2021
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This should be interesting. I look forward to reading it. Human trafficking is a horrible thing. I hate to think about what happen when innocent children become the victims. I enjoyed the prologue and first chapter and I'll try to read this book as you write it.
Beth
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2021
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Hi, Beth. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Heartrending prologue, intriguing mission! Stunning rendition of brutality and personification of both Good and Evil.
When I am old enough, my father swears he will sell *ME* to a man who buys slaves for auction.
Cris ... plane crash took the life of his family. [Cal=>CRIS] missed the flight.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2021
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Heartrending prologue, intriguing mission! Stunning rendition of brutality and personification of both Good and Evil.
When I am old enough, my father swears he will sell *ME* to a man who buys slaves for auction.
Cris ... plane crash took the life of his family. [Cal=>CRIS] missed the flight.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2021
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Hi, Elizabeth. Thank you for your kind words and help with this story!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Judy Lawless
This is looking like it will be an excellent novel, Mike. The prologue is disturbing, as is the explanation in the notes. It's hard to believe that this type of thing still exists in our world. I'm looking forward to following this. Very well written.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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This is looking like it will be an excellent novel, Mike. The prologue is disturbing, as is the explanation in the notes. It's hard to believe that this type of thing still exists in our world. I'm looking forward to following this. Very well written.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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Hi, Judy. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from royowen
I was involved in a mission to Cambodia where children are frequently sold to whatever depravity the darkness has for those precious kids. So I know what your getting into, these families are so poor, they are easily coerced. Beautifully written Mike, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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I was involved in a mission to Cambodia where children are frequently sold to whatever depravity the darkness has for those precious kids. So I know what your getting into, these families are so poor, they are easily coerced. Beautifully written Mike, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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Hi, Roy. It's amazing how the government has turned a blind eye to this horror. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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It?s the poverty Mike, the children do it themselves, almost a tradition, the organisation educates the kids and teaches young folk how to earn a living, it?s more complex than you think.
Comment from Sally Law
First, out of respect for those who have a hard time with this, or suffer from emotional trauma because of sexual abuse, please mark this for violence and for sexual content. I backed out of this three times.
In my crime/fiction novella, I always keep it marked for violence even if it's just mentioned in passing. I do this for my readers.
I'm glad there are angels about commissioned by God in this lost world. I have encountered several and I'm sure they have carried me thus far.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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First, out of respect for those who have a hard time with this, or suffer from emotional trauma because of sexual abuse, please mark this for violence and for sexual content. I backed out of this three times.
In my crime/fiction novella, I always keep it marked for violence even if it's just mentioned in passing. I do this for my readers.
I'm glad there are angels about commissioned by God in this lost world. I have encountered several and I'm sure they have carried me thus far.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
Comment Written 20-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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Hi, Sally. I was wondering if I should put a warning on this story. I will. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from BeckyRae
This is very interesting. I love good vs evil stories. Thank you for the background on India. Only thing I noticed that needs fixing is in the second sentence: "Gabriel Hope is {in}the process..." Good luck with this.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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This is very interesting. I love good vs evil stories. Thank you for the background on India. Only thing I noticed that needs fixing is in the second sentence: "Gabriel Hope is {in}the process..." Good luck with this.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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Hi, Becky. Thank you for your kind words and help with this story!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
