Kyle
a 75-word story16 total reviews
Comment from judiverse
I think I've seen that picture used before. It must be popular it's so cute. I don't know about those Copernicus quotes. Maybe the book they were in was heavy. Lot of fun with the alliteration. Kyle was like a lot of the knerdy types and got picked on, unfortunately. I like the idea of a camp for kindergarteners. judi
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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I think I've seen that picture used before. It must be popular it's so cute. I don't know about those Copernicus quotes. Maybe the book they were in was heavy. Lot of fun with the alliteration. Kyle was like a lot of the knerdy types and got picked on, unfortunately. I like the idea of a camp for kindergarteners. judi
Comment Written 10-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Judi, for giving this a look. The quotes I found from the astronomer were neither deep nor tome-worthy. Here is one:
To know that we know what we know, and to know that we do not know what we do not know, that is true knowledge.
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You're welcome. Similar to one I learned in high school: judi
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Your alliteration is clever, fun, and easy flowing, and also in doing so made a good point of brains over brawn.
I truly enjoyed the read.
Regards,
Mary
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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Your alliteration is clever, fun, and easy flowing, and also in doing so made a good point of brains over brawn.
I truly enjoyed the read.
Regards,
Mary
Comment Written 08-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Mary
Comment from nomi338
Brains over brawn, courage over boorishness every time. You may get by being a bully for a time, but your fall will be mighty when the day comes and an intended victim emerges the victor by vanquishing the faux tough guy. It takes far more courage to expose yourself to a bully's mistreatment every day than it does to take advantage of some one who is afraid of you.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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Brains over brawn, courage over boorishness every time. You may get by being a bully for a time, but your fall will be mighty when the day comes and an intended victim emerges the victor by vanquishing the faux tough guy. It takes far more courage to expose yourself to a bully's mistreatment every day than it does to take advantage of some one who is afraid of you.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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Thanks, nomi, for giving this a look and responding. Bill
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Bill, I like your unique take on brains vs. brawn. Also your alliteration is excellent. Beautiful photo, Bill.
Good luck in the contest.
Exceptional work.
Best wishes,
Cindy.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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Bill, I like your unique take on brains vs. brawn. Also your alliteration is excellent. Beautiful photo, Bill.
Good luck in the contest.
Exceptional work.
Best wishes,
Cindy.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Cindy, for the terrific review. This form is fun.
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You?re welcome, Bill.
Comment from kahpot
How very cleverly written, with all alliteration here you have manage to tell a story and give a wonderful message, this photo fits perfectly with your story, very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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How very cleverly written, with all alliteration here you have manage to tell a story and give a wonderful message, this photo fits perfectly with your story, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 07-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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Thank you, kahpot
Comment from Ulla
Hi Bill, great alliteration her in this little story where Kyle wins over Kenny in the end. Well thought out and would have been a great entry for a competition. I liked it. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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Hi Bill, great alliteration her in this little story where Kyle wins over Kenny in the end. Well thought out and would have been a great entry for a competition. I liked it. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 07-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Ulla.
Comment from lyenochka
At first, I thought this would be another of your childhood friends but I see it's an alliterative story peppered with a happy ending. Hooray for Kyle's victory over Kenny!
kinestetics coach's (kinesthetics)
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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At first, I thought this would be another of your childhood friends but I see it's an alliterative story peppered with a happy ending. Hooray for Kyle's victory over Kenny!
kinestetics coach's (kinesthetics)
Comment Written 07-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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One day I will present you a piece that is entirely spelled correctly. : )
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Lol. One day, you'll be correcting my spelling. My eyes may not see the words correctly anyway...
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is an interesting example of alliteration, mixing K, C, and Q together because it relies on sound rather more than on visuals. Taken as a whole, the alliteration is present to a very high level, reflecting an extensive vocabulary.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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This is an interesting example of alliteration, mixing K, C, and Q together because it relies on sound rather more than on visuals. Taken as a whole, the alliteration is present to a very high level, reflecting an extensive vocabulary.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Katherine, for the positive review. Bill
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Brilliant alliteration in this clever write with all those sounds repeating I didn't get cross once! Clever, creative concepts with clean flowing clips of courage, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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Brilliant alliteration in this clever write with all those sounds repeating I didn't get cross once! Clever, creative concepts with clean flowing clips of courage, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Dolly for kindly kovering *Kyle*.
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Bill, I need to add only a few words to this lexicon of Contrary words. That is to Call this particular entry, Cute!
Isn't it amazing how many words there are in the English language, some with a K and some with a C, that Culminate in a Critique, like this one.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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Dear Bill, I need to add only a few words to this lexicon of Contrary words. That is to Call this particular entry, Cute!
Isn't it amazing how many words there are in the English language, some with a K and some with a C, that Culminate in a Critique, like this one.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Suzanna.
