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Kyle

a 75-word story

16 total reviews 
Comment from judiverse
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I think I've seen that picture used before. It must be popular it's so cute. I don't know about those Copernicus quotes. Maybe the book they were in was heavy. Lot of fun with the alliteration. Kyle was like a lot of the knerdy types and got picked on, unfortunately. I like the idea of a camp for kindergarteners. judi

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
    Thank you, Judi, for giving this a look. The quotes I found from the astronomer were neither deep nor tome-worthy. Here is one:

    To know that we know what we know, and to know that we do not know what we do not know, that is true knowledge.

reply by judiverse on 12-Apr-2021
    You're welcome. Similar to one I learned in high school: judi
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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Your alliteration is clever, fun, and easy flowing, and also in doing so made a good point of brains over brawn.
I truly enjoyed the read.
Regards,
Mary

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
    Thank you, Mary
Comment from nomi338
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Brains over brawn, courage over boorishness every time. You may get by being a bully for a time, but your fall will be mighty when the day comes and an intended victim emerges the victor by vanquishing the faux tough guy. It takes far more courage to expose yourself to a bully's mistreatment every day than it does to take advantage of some one who is afraid of you.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
    Thanks, nomi, for giving this a look and responding. Bill
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
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Bill, I like your unique take on brains vs. brawn. Also your alliteration is excellent. Beautiful photo, Bill.
Good luck in the contest.
Exceptional work.
Best wishes,
Cindy.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
    Thank you, Cindy, for the terrific review. This form is fun.
reply by Cindy Decker 2 on 08-Apr-2021
    You?re welcome, Bill.
Comment from kahpot
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How very cleverly written, with all alliteration here you have manage to tell a story and give a wonderful message, this photo fits perfectly with your story, very well written****kahpot

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
    Thank you, kahpot
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Bill, great alliteration her in this little story where Kyle wins over Kenny in the end. Well thought out and would have been a great entry for a competition. I liked it. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
    Thank you, Ulla.
Comment from lyenochka
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At first, I thought this would be another of your childhood friends but I see it's an alliterative story peppered with a happy ending. Hooray for Kyle's victory over Kenny!

kinestetics coach's (kinesthetics)

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
    One day I will present you a piece that is entirely spelled correctly. : )
reply by lyenochka on 07-Apr-2021
    Lol. One day, you'll be correcting my spelling. My eyes may not see the words correctly anyway...
Comment from Katherine M. Kean
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This is an interesting example of alliteration, mixing K, C, and Q together because it relies on sound rather more than on visuals. Taken as a whole, the alliteration is present to a very high level, reflecting an extensive vocabulary.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
    Thank you, Katherine, for the positive review. Bill
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Brilliant alliteration in this clever write with all those sounds repeating I didn't get cross once! Clever, creative concepts with clean flowing clips of courage, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
    Thank you, Dolly for kindly kovering *Kyle*.
Comment from Suzanna Ray
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Dear Bill, I need to add only a few words to this lexicon of Contrary words. That is to Call this particular entry, Cute!
Isn't it amazing how many words there are in the English language, some with a K and some with a C, that Culminate in a Critique, like this one.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
    Thank you, Suzanna.