Heart Crafted Poems -2021
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Tempt Me Not"Musings of an old man -2021
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Comment from lyenochka
Great job with your quadruple tetractys! I have only written single ones but making them multiple allows you to give a more complete picture as you have done here. That's the nature of temptation. We always need to be on alert and as for protection against the "siren's call" (or sirens' call).
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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Great job with your quadruple tetractys! I have only written single ones but making them multiple allows you to give a more complete picture as you have done here. That's the nature of temptation. We always need to be on alert and as for protection against the "siren's call" (or sirens' call).
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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from royowen
I must admit I've only ever written one solitary stanza in the past, I probably lack the intellect to write more than one. But this is brilliant my talented friend, you've extended the requirements so much I may never try one again. Well done, Jim, an excellent post, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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I must admit I've only ever written one solitary stanza in the past, I probably lack the intellect to write more than one. But this is brilliant my talented friend, you've extended the requirements so much I may never try one again. Well done, Jim, an excellent post, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Thank you Roy, I found it must be multiplied to complete a story.
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Well done
