Heart Crafted Poems -2021
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Tempt Me Not"Musings of an old man -2021
32 total reviews
Comment from Dr. Nad
Hey Jim, I'm not smart enough to begin to do what you have done within the confines of your poetic requirements. What I do know is that you have done a masterful job. Speaking to us about a subject we are all familiar with and one that, hopefully, we struggle with. If we don't struggle we just give in. You have reminded us that there are rough times in the past, But there is hope for the future. Life has its difficult challenges but we can say no. The wise man does! Thanks for sharing. Embrace the love from above.
reply by the author on 23-May-2021
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Hey Jim, I'm not smart enough to begin to do what you have done within the confines of your poetic requirements. What I do know is that you have done a masterful job. Speaking to us about a subject we are all familiar with and one that, hopefully, we struggle with. If we don't struggle we just give in. You have reminded us that there are rough times in the past, But there is hope for the future. Life has its difficult challenges but we can say no. The wise man does! Thanks for sharing. Embrace the love from above.
Comment Written 22-May-2021
reply by the author on 23-May-2021
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Thank you for this wonderful validation.
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You are so very welcome. Sorry for the delayed response.
Comment from nomi338
The well documented allure of the sirens of the sea would be so strong and inducement, that there is no way I would ever take to the sea without adequate female companionship. A lonely man is a prime candidate for seduction.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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The well documented allure of the sirens of the sea would be so strong and inducement, that there is no way I would ever take to the sea without adequate female companionship. A lonely man is a prime candidate for seduction.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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Thank you for your review Nomi, have a wonderful day.
Comment from Vanna1
Good presentation. I like your theme about keeping your dignity and restraining temptation. This world is so full of treats. Look good, taste good but make you sick and unhealthy. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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Good presentation. I like your theme about keeping your dignity and restraining temptation. This world is so full of treats. Look good, taste good but make you sick and unhealthy. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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Vanna, thank you for the review and comments.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
The visual form of this poem is stunning. It drew me in at the beginning, and kept me there, standing firm (I read), as the words of the poem washed around my legs. The whole thing was quite an experience for me. Thank you.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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The visual form of this poem is stunning. It drew me in at the beginning, and kept me there, standing firm (I read), as the words of the poem washed around my legs. The whole thing was quite an experience for me. Thank you.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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Katherine how delightful to read your comment. I am very grateful. 🎶
Comment from Goodadvicechan
Memories are unavoidable. I like what your poem says: " Lingering memories, while I collect moments of near
pleasant times once held." The key word are pleasant times. Please keep the pleasant ones and let the unpleasant ones be the past.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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Memories are unavoidable. I like what your poem says: " Lingering memories, while I collect moments of near
pleasant times once held." The key word are pleasant times. Please keep the pleasant ones and let the unpleasant ones be the past.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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Thanks or your comments.
Comment from Kit Nongkhlaw
Amazing poem. I liked your style and the way you form the words,
Stand
firm with
my reserve!
I must protect
my vested caution while temptation calls.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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Amazing poem. I liked your style and the way you form the words,
Stand
firm with
my reserve!
I must protect
my vested caution while temptation calls.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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Kitbok...thank you so much!
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your tetractis poem. It's beautifully written. Nicely done. Well written. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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I have enjoyed reading your tetractis poem. It's beautifully written. Nicely done. Well written. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 08-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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Thank you Raul!
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You're welcome!
Comment from Lighthouse Keeper
Beautifully done and in a wonderfully unique (to me) structure. I can feel the pull and tug and push of the voice struggling to keep control. The structure helps with this ebb and flow of the soul's desire. Well done.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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Beautifully done and in a wonderfully unique (to me) structure. I can feel the pull and tug and push of the voice struggling to keep control. The structure helps with this ebb and flow of the soul's desire. Well done.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much, for taking the time and interest in reviewing my poem.
Comment from 4theloveoftrees
Interesting form and a fantastic message, resist temptation in favor of pleasant times that may be a bit in the distance and stand firm. Nicely written, great job.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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Interesting form and a fantastic message, resist temptation in favor of pleasant times that may be a bit in the distance and stand firm. Nicely written, great job.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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MY good nature friend~ thank you for your investment of time to read and comment on this poem.
Comment from Boogienights
Although temptation will lure you in, there are always memories to pull you back. I like this form of poetry you've chosen here. It gives the reader little time to reflect, but enough to have an emotional impact. Well done.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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Although temptation will lure you in, there are always memories to pull you back. I like this form of poetry you've chosen here. It gives the reader little time to reflect, but enough to have an emotional impact. Well done.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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Hey Boogienights, Yes temptations do revolve like a door. Some can cause quite a stir ...
