Feathered Friends
Nonet8 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This nonet, Feathered Friends, has the proper nine to one descending syllable formatting and recalls meeting chatty ducks with a full day planned of fowl play.
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This nonet, Feathered Friends, has the proper nine to one descending syllable formatting and recalls meeting chatty ducks with a full day planned of fowl play.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2021
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is a very amusing nonet, which I would expect to be well-received in the voting booths. I like the way you have personified the ducks by giving them voices, and the double entendre on the last syllable is very fine.
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This is a very amusing nonet, which I would expect to be well-received in the voting booths. I like the way you have personified the ducks by giving them voices, and the double entendre on the last syllable is very fine.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2021
Comment from Erika Seshadri
This is so cute! My son is obsessed with ducks. I'll have to read it to him. I hope it does well in the Nonet Poem Contest prompt.
All the best. Have a great evening!
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This is so cute! My son is obsessed with ducks. I'll have to read it to him. I hope it does well in the Nonet Poem Contest prompt.
All the best. Have a great evening!
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
Comment from LisaMay
"Waddled on, looking prim" is such an appropriate observation of ducks. I enjoyed your entertaining poem - it painted a picture of your encounter very humorously.
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"Waddled on, looking prim" is such an appropriate observation of ducks. I enjoyed your entertaining poem - it painted a picture of your encounter very humorously.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
Comment from L. Kalere
I just love your nonet. It's sweet, and well written and thankfully your syllables count is correct, which is sometimes difficult to do. You've got your ducks all lined up in a row :)) Best of luck in the contest,
linda
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I just love your nonet. It's sweet, and well written and thankfully your syllables count is correct, which is sometimes difficult to do. You've got your ducks all lined up in a row :)) Best of luck in the contest,
linda
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
Comment from Susan Newell
Well done. Not just luck to see duck, but to hear their story as well. This will do well in the contest. Nice alliteration and rhyming. I liked the term "waddle walk," and hope I don't get there too soon!
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Well done. Not just luck to see duck, but to hear their story as well. This will do well in the contest. Nice alliteration and rhyming. I liked the term "waddle walk," and hope I don't get there too soon!
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job, Mystery Author, with your nonet contest entry. Your syllable count is correct per line, the image is perfect and so cute, the rhymes work well to tell of this encounter, and the shape of the completed poem is great. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
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You did a great job, Mystery Author, with your nonet contest entry. Your syllable count is correct per line, the image is perfect and so cute, the rhymes work well to tell of this encounter, and the shape of the completed poem is great. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
There are so many lovely elements working together in this piece. You incorporate rhyme, the nonet form and take us on a journey through nature. Well done!
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There are so many lovely elements working together in this piece. You incorporate rhyme, the nonet form and take us on a journey through nature. Well done!
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
