Let Kindness Show
It will lighten your life and others63 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Fine caring words and wise advice, being kind to each other certainly spreads the word and passes on the good deeds, much enjoyed, great rhymes and sentiments, love Dolly x
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Fine caring words and wise advice, being kind to each other certainly spreads the word and passes on the good deeds, much enjoyed, great rhymes and sentiments, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you for your wonderful words, Jaybird. Your well rhymed poem of life advice reminds me of Proverbs 3:3
"Let love and faithfulness never leave you;
bind them around your neck,
write them on the tablet of your heart."
Let's keep smiling and being kind.
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Thank you for your wonderful words, Jaybird. Your well rhymed poem of life advice reminds me of Proverbs 3:3
"Let love and faithfulness never leave you;
bind them around your neck,
write them on the tablet of your heart."
Let's keep smiling and being kind.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I agree with everything you wrote. Your poem has a great and true message. The rhymes are good, there's good flow, and your message is loud and clear. We all need to follow it.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
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I agree with everything you wrote. Your poem has a great and true message. The rhymes are good, there's good flow, and your message is loud and clear. We all need to follow it.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
Comment from Bill Schott
This sonnet, Let Kindness Show, has the general formatting and allows that we should lean into a kinder approach to humanity as we striv3 to pull together as one people.
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This sonnet, Let Kindness Show, has the general formatting and allows that we should lean into a kinder approach to humanity as we striv3 to pull together as one people.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
Comment from DeboraDyess
Preach on, Brother Jay! ð???
Your poems are always such life lessons and so uplifting. I so wish I knew you in person. You must be such a blessing to all around you. I know you are here on FS.
No errors, corrections, or suggestions. Just a lovely poem.
Blessings,
Deb
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Preach on, Brother Jay! ð???
Your poems are always such life lessons and so uplifting. I so wish I knew you in person. You must be such a blessing to all around you. I know you are here on FS.
No errors, corrections, or suggestions. Just a lovely poem.
Blessings,
Deb
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is a fine poem concerning the main virtues that we should be aiming to espouse as we leave our mark on the world during our brief lives. If we can stick to this we won't be going far wrong.
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This is a fine poem concerning the main virtues that we should be aiming to espouse as we leave our mark on the world during our brief lives. If we can stick to this we won't be going far wrong.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear jay, I never tire, of you're words of wisdom, because they are always Surrounded with these words that rhyme and caused them to stick in your mind, as you go about your day,
I am often reminded, when I see a sad, or worried face, I remember your wise counsel, to reach out, and take the time, to help another, have a better day.
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Dear jay, I never tire, of you're words of wisdom, because they are always Surrounded with these words that rhyme and caused them to stick in your mind, as you go about your day,
I am often reminded, when I see a sad, or worried face, I remember your wise counsel, to reach out, and take the time, to help another, have a better day.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
Comment from Sharon Davis
This poem has a easy flow, great rhyming scheme, and an important directive ... be kind. Kindness uplifts and makes the burdens we share so much easier to bear. Well presented. Nicely stated.
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This poem has a easy flow, great rhyming scheme, and an important directive ... be kind. Kindness uplifts and makes the burdens we share so much easier to bear. Well presented. Nicely stated.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
Comment from phil nelson
More words of wisdom from my now favourite sage. I really enjoy your poetry for its simple messaging of love and caring for our fellow men and women. It is easy to follow and your rhythm and rhymes are always right on the money. Thank you for this very pleasant poem.
All the Best!
Phil
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More words of wisdom from my now favourite sage. I really enjoy your poetry for its simple messaging of love and caring for our fellow men and women. It is easy to follow and your rhythm and rhymes are always right on the money. Thank you for this very pleasant poem.
All the Best!
Phil
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
There are many who heed what you say, but wouldn't it be wonderful if we could say "They all heed what you say." I am satisfied that at least those around me are truly of that genre. Nicely written, Jaybird.
Ralf
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There are many who heed what you say, but wouldn't it be wonderful if we could say "They all heed what you say." I am satisfied that at least those around me are truly of that genre. Nicely written, Jaybird.
Ralf
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
