Let Kindness Show
It will lighten your life and others63 total reviews
Comment from Lighthouse Keeper
A beautiful sentiment is a soothing verse and pace. If only more people would do as the poem suggests. This is short and to the point with a great message. Well done. Great message.
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A beautiful sentiment is a soothing verse and pace. If only more people would do as the poem suggests. This is short and to the point with a great message. Well done. Great message.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2021
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Touching sentiments--spot-on advice--you words to the wise are well rendered in accessible imagery and graceful form. I like your attitude to life--keep them coming!
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Touching sentiments--spot-on advice--you words to the wise are well rendered in accessible imagery and graceful form. I like your attitude to life--keep them coming!
Comment Written 07-Apr-2021
Comment from robyn corum
Jay,
Can you just imagine a world like this? I wasn't a huge fan of John Lennon, but I can see the words/message to his most popular song here. (Imagine)
If we would all just turn to each other and remember the Golden Rule - what a world this would be! Thanks!
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Jay,
Can you just imagine a world like this? I wasn't a huge fan of John Lennon, but I can see the words/message to his most popular song here. (Imagine)
If we would all just turn to each other and remember the Golden Rule - what a world this would be! Thanks!
Comment Written 07-Apr-2021
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your poem makes me smile and nod my head in total agreement. Smiles and kinds words, also laughter, are like serum for sad, troubled people--not a permanent cure, but as least temporary help. Lovely poem
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Your poem makes me smile and nod my head in total agreement. Smiles and kinds words, also laughter, are like serum for sad, troubled people--not a permanent cure, but as least temporary help. Lovely poem
Comment Written 07-Apr-2021
Comment from Kerry L Batchelder
Very nicely written on a good topic, kindness. We need more of this in today's world. A smile is worth a thousand words and a good deed is indeed appreciated and reciprocated. Thank you for your beautiful words.
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Very nicely written on a good topic, kindness. We need more of this in today's world. A smile is worth a thousand words and a good deed is indeed appreciated and reciprocated. Thank you for your beautiful words.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2021
Comment from QC Poet
Hello Mr. Jaybird1, the flow of your beautiful poem offering reminded me of a childhood song," Let there be Peace on Earth and Let it Begin with Me". So much so I'll be singing it all day in my mind today. Blessings to you and Thank you for Sharing your poem.
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Hello Mr. Jaybird1, the flow of your beautiful poem offering reminded me of a childhood song," Let there be Peace on Earth and Let it Begin with Me". So much so I'll be singing it all day in my mind today. Blessings to you and Thank you for Sharing your poem.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2021
Comment from Jeffrey Ford
I think that you have written a really great post.I love the message about being kind to others. I also love showing kindness even in your final act. Great poem and thank you for sharing!
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I think that you have written a really great post.I love the message about being kind to others. I also love showing kindness even in your final act. Great poem and thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 07-Apr-2021
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
Kindness is caring for others, even when they may not care for you. When I see an act of kindness, it makes even my night bright. As we grow older we prefer kindness to other worldly smartness. Thank you for sharing a loving poem!
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Kindness is caring for others, even when they may not care for you. When I see an act of kindness, it makes even my night bright. As we grow older we prefer kindness to other worldly smartness. Thank you for sharing a loving poem!
Comment Written 07-Apr-2021
Comment from Bluesatinbutterfly
This is a lovely sentiment and one I wish everyone would follow. There's one little thing I'd like to query if I may? The third stanza, first line, third word, did you mean that to be "in" instead of "any"?
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This is a lovely sentiment and one I wish everyone would follow. There's one little thing I'd like to query if I may? The third stanza, first line, third word, did you mean that to be "in" instead of "any"?
Comment Written 07-Apr-2021
Comment from Patty Palmer
This poem reminds everyone to treat others as you would like to be treated yourself. Good job God bless! if you follow that golden rule, you will always be on the safe side.
Patty
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This poem reminds everyone to treat others as you would like to be treated yourself. Good job God bless! if you follow that golden rule, you will always be on the safe side.
Patty
Comment Written 07-Apr-2021
