Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Such a cute poem with a nice rhyme. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings. And nothing comes to mind to shareğ???so use your mind to give your thoughts a dare.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021

Thanks, Iza

Comment from Sherry Asbury

Excellent

Excellent villanelle! A very different approach that is quite appealing - love it...you are very clever to have produced something that is nothing and yet is all.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021

Thank you, Sherry

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I thought you wrote a creative poem. Kinda had no idea I guess! But this could also describe someone that is losing memory. Very creative and well written. I loved it.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021

Thank you, Michael.

Comment from kmoss

Excellent

This is a clever write to give the old writer's block the heave ho out of your way! I enjoyed it. It gave me a chuckle. Good luck in the contest if it isn't over yet.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021

Thank you, kmoss.

reply by the author on 15-Apr-2021

Thank you, kmoss.

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Well - your vacant villanelle was a success even if nothing came to mind! I enjoyed it because I could identify with it. Sometimes everything one wants to say seems to have already been said! Well done, and good wishes for the contest.

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021

Thank you, Wendy

Comment from Shenelle Coplien

Excellent

I can easily relate to writers block and that is exactly what I think this poem is about! Sometimes we spent our time just staring at a blank screen and forget we even have talent!

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021

Thank you, Shenelle, for the excellent review.

Comment from Anne Johnston

Excellent

That is a different poem for this contest. Since I have never written one of these Villanelle, I am probably not the best one to judge, but I think you did a great job on this.

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021

Thank you, Anne.

reply by Anne Johnston on 13-Apr-2021

You are welcome

Comment from 4theloveoftrees

Exceptional

Love, love, love this. Made me smile and laugh and at the same time, it is very well done. So far as I can see, you've got the winner here! thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2021

Thank you, 4, for the terrific review.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This Villanelle Poetry Contest Entry speaks candidly to present a vacant villanelle for you are in such a state, nothing comes to mind for you to tell; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2021

Thanks, ALD

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Great idea, to use when nothing, and no real subject comes to mind, then just write about that time when nothing came to mind. Slice of life poem and stories are becoming more popular these days.

Good form and smart idea. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2021

Thanks, lance