Beech Blanket
a 5-7-522 total reviews
Comment from damommy
Yes, I got it. Very good play on words. The butterfly looks very comfortable on his 'blanket.' This is a good entry for the contest. I wish you lots of luck.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Yes, I got it. Very good play on words. The butterfly looks very comfortable on his 'blanket.' This is a good entry for the contest. I wish you lots of luck.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Yvonne.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and
presentation, Bill.
-A well written poem
with good syllable count,
topic, and imagery.
-Good play on words
with "beech blanket."
-I can't help but think
about the butterfly and
playing 'beech blanket bingo!!'
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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-Good artwork and
presentation, Bill.
-A well written poem
with good syllable count,
topic, and imagery.
-Good play on words
with "beech blanket."
-I can't help but think
about the butterfly and
playing 'beech blanket bingo!!'
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Pam
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You are very welcome, Bill.
Comment from BethShelby
Clever play on words. This does look like a very comfy beach blanket for the butterfly. The alliteration of beech blanket and butterfly make this into a pleasant 5-7-5 peom.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Clever play on words. This does look like a very comfy beach blanket for the butterfly. The alliteration of beech blanket and butterfly make this into a pleasant 5-7-5 peom.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Beth
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written three line poem. Awesome photo to compliment your words. These leaves together make a groovy beech blanket for this butterfly. Beautiful butterfly. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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This is a beautifully written three line poem. Awesome photo to compliment your words. These leaves together make a groovy beech blanket for this butterfly. Beautiful butterfly. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Thanks, Joanne
Comment from Sally Law
Yes, I get it. Adorable short verse and aptly illustrated. Sweet and fun for the upcoming contest, Bill. I wish you all the best, and a lovely day,
Sal XOs...
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Yes, I get it. Adorable short verse and aptly illustrated. Sweet and fun for the upcoming contest, Bill. I wish you all the best, and a lovely day,
Sal XOs...
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Sal
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, this is a sweet sentiment Bill and the butterfly is no doubt sunning itself here. A fine presentation and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Ha ha ha, this is a sweet sentiment Bill and the butterfly is no doubt sunning itself here. A fine presentation and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Dolly
Comment from L. Kalere
This is a very cute play on words, but I have to admit I thought you had mis-spelled beech and was about to send you a little note. Thank goodness for author's notes. Nicely done. Best of luck in the contest.
Linda
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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This is a very cute play on words, but I have to admit I thought you had mis-spelled beech and was about to send you a little note. Thank goodness for author's notes. Nicely done. Best of luck in the contest.
Linda
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Linda
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
As so often before my morning tea kicks in, I am dysfunctional. I get nothing. The penny will probably drop in about an hour when I am in my shower. But by then of course I will be on a different treadmill... In the meantime, the surface view looks good.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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As so often before my morning tea kicks in, I am dysfunctional. I get nothing. The penny will probably drop in about an hour when I am in my shower. But by then of course I will be on a different treadmill... In the meantime, the surface view looks good.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Here?s to post-tea time function.
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
Bill! This is terrific. So much imagination wrapped up in what is incredibly real and honest. It's always a joy to read alongside a photo that shines an even brighter light on wonderful writing.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Bill! This is terrific. So much imagination wrapped up in what is incredibly real and honest. It's always a joy to read alongside a photo that shines an even brighter light on wonderful writing.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Thank you, LHS, for the kind review.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Such beauty landed on a fresh leaf, life goes on: "these leaves together
make a groovy beech blanket
for this butterfly". Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Such beauty landed on a fresh leaf, life goes on: "these leaves together
make a groovy beech blanket
for this butterfly". Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Iza
