Beech Blanket
a 5-7-522 total reviews
Comment from Earl Corp
I got it before I read your notes. I wondered why you spelled beach that way. You're kind of dating yourself by using the word groovy. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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I got it before I read your notes. I wondered why you spelled beach that way. You're kind of dating yourself by using the word groovy. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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I thought the leaves had grooves on them. : )
Comment from Sharon Davis
A very creative topic choice. This 5-7-5 piece creates a wonderful image of the symbiotic relationships that can be found throughout the natural world. Nicely presented.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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A very creative topic choice. This 5-7-5 piece creates a wonderful image of the symbiotic relationships that can be found throughout the natural world. Nicely presented.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Sharon
Comment from kahpot
Very well done, great photo for these words, beech, blanket, butterfly in three lines you have given a wonderful image, very well presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Very well done, great photo for these words, beech, blanket, butterfly in three lines you have given a wonderful image, very well presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Thank you, kahpot.
Comment from judiverse
Oh, cleverly done. You have the winning touch these days, and best of luck with this one. I like the play on the word "beech." Nice alliteration with beech, blanket, and butterfly, too. What a cozy picture of the butterfly all curled up in the leaves. judi
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Oh, cleverly done. You have the winning touch these days, and best of luck with this one. I like the play on the word "beech." Nice alliteration with beech, blanket, and butterfly, too. What a cozy picture of the butterfly all curled up in the leaves. judi
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Judi. My stock is up lately.
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You're welcome. Must be the Biden bump. judi
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Of course, I get it. Your contest entry is groovy. I like the play on the word 'beech.' The art is a great choice. Good job with the syllable count per line. I like the alliteration of b. Your words plus the art make an interesting poem. Best wishes.
Thank you for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Of course, I get it. Your contest entry is groovy. I like the play on the word 'beech.' The art is a great choice. Good job with the syllable count per line. I like the alliteration of b. Your words plus the art make an interesting poem. Best wishes.
Thank you for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Jan, for the encouraging review.
Comment from nomi338
(Are butterfly gender neutral?) He/she looks comfy nestled there in that blanket of leaves. It also looks dangerously tempting like a salad for some hungry beast looking to slake its hunger.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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(Are butterfly gender neutral?) He/she looks comfy nestled there in that blanket of leaves. It also looks dangerously tempting like a salad for some hungry beast looking to slake its hunger.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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A lot more violence here than I thought.
Comment from Mark D. R.
Bill,
yes, the butterfly gets it sun wherever - in the forest or the beach
do like your pun for your beech blanket choice
best wishes in the voting
Mark
P. S. nice image accompanies your post
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Bill,
yes, the butterfly gets it sun wherever - in the forest or the beach
do like your pun for your beech blanket choice
best wishes in the voting
Mark
P. S. nice image accompanies your post
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Mark
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
I get it and I see a fantastic photo. How unique. Some photographers are able to get such original pictures. It is a match for your words. How they find such great scenes is beyond me.
Ralf
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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I get it and I see a fantastic photo. How unique. Some photographers are able to get such original pictures. It is a match for your words. How they find such great scenes is beyond me.
Ralf
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Thanks, Ralf. By me too.
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Bill, I for one, got your Pun! But I think only you would see in this picture, a beach blanket for a butterfly.
I do hope the judges at the CEC will appreciate the humor, and the poetry. Good luck in this contest
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Dear Bill, I for one, got your Pun! But I think only you would see in this picture, a beach blanket for a butterfly.
I do hope the judges at the CEC will appreciate the humor, and the poetry. Good luck in this contest
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Suzanna.
Comment from Mastery
Good one, Bill. I sincerely believe due to the originality of this three lines, you have the winner here. It's not that easy to write three meaningful lines of poetry in the same poem, is it? Take care and thanks for sharing, my friend. Bob
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Good one, Bill. I sincerely believe due to the originality of this three lines, you have the winner here. It's not that easy to write three meaningful lines of poetry in the same poem, is it? Take care and thanks for sharing, my friend. Bob
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Bob.
