Hawkshaw, Chapter 3
The Trevails Of Harrison Barnhart8 total reviews
Comment from GE Parson
Bret, Either your thinking and writing is way over 120 IQ or mine is 120 blow IQ because I was lost
in you story from the git-go. I admire your way of describe people and situations, but I have no idea
what country you are descirbing or the kind of people involved. However, I'm still looking forward
to your next chpter. Your friend, Jerr
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2021
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Bret, Either your thinking and writing is way over 120 IQ or mine is 120 blow IQ because I was lost
in you story from the git-go. I admire your way of describe people and situations, but I have no idea
what country you are descirbing or the kind of people involved. However, I'm still looking forward
to your next chpter. Your friend, Jerr
Comment Written 19-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2021
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Glad you enjoyed this story. Appreciate your insights and the review.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Harrison Barnhart is not a good guy and I pray I never meet anybody like him in my life. I did enjoy reading. You are developing the characters very well and the descriptions of the scenes are well done.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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Harrison Barnhart is not a good guy and I pray I never meet anybody like him in my life. I did enjoy reading. You are developing the characters very well and the descriptions of the scenes are well done.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter. More to follow. Appreciate the review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Thanks for sharing another fun chapter. This one brings back lots of fond memories. I remember driving over from McAllen, TX into Mexico with regularity. A one-lane road, no checkpoint or guards. We just came and went as we pleased. But I'm sure that has probably changed in 30-years or more. There was a place we would visit and sometimes stay a month or until the money ran out.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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Thanks for sharing another fun chapter. This one brings back lots of fond memories. I remember driving over from McAllen, TX into Mexico with regularity. A one-lane road, no checkpoint or guards. We just came and went as we pleased. But I'm sure that has probably changed in 30-years or more. There was a place we would visit and sometimes stay a month or until the money ran out.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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Always so insightful. Much more to come. Appreciate the review.
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Mathew, I find it interesting that you use cartoon animals as a substitute for the real human criminals that invade and corrupt our society, at every level.
I will continue to follow these posts, to see how these critters bring the crooks to justice.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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Dear Mathew, I find it interesting that you use cartoon animals as a substitute for the real human criminals that invade and corrupt our society, at every level.
I will continue to follow these posts, to see how these critters bring the crooks to justice.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Appreciate the review.
Comment from R.E.R.
The verbiage in this is incredible! Such an interesting and thoughtful read. The historical callbacks to the origin of items or locations makes it stand out to me.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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The verbiage in this is incredible! Such an interesting and thoughtful read. The historical callbacks to the origin of items or locations makes it stand out to me.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Appreciate the review.
Comment from Judy Lawless
Another intense chapter, Brett. It moves quickly, so I have to keep my wits about me. lol It will be interesting to see what is coming up next for poor Pablo.
One little typo: Manipulated numbers ensured (i)nvestors.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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Another intense chapter, Brett. It moves quickly, so I have to keep my wits about me. lol It will be interesting to see what is coming up next for poor Pablo.
One little typo: Manipulated numbers ensured (i)nvestors.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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Appreciate the catch and the review. Glad you enjoyed this chapter.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I enjoy reading your book and the dialogues are humorous and good characterization. I have a little problem with the last paragraph. You give away too much there. You can show it in actions and dialogues. It's always better: Show and don't tell.
Well done.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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I enjoy reading your book and the dialogues are humorous and good characterization. I have a little problem with the last paragraph. You give away too much there. You can show it in actions and dialogues. It's always better: Show and don't tell.
Well done.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Appreciate the review.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Chapter 3 of the Mystery and Crime Fiction speaks in continuation, interestingly, thru a nice narrative taletelling about Harrison, progresses thru balanced plot development, ends with crime affairs; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2021
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This Chapter 3 of the Mystery and Crime Fiction speaks in continuation, interestingly, thru a nice narrative taletelling about Harrison, progresses thru balanced plot development, ends with crime affairs; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 14-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2021
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Review received.
