Heaven And Earth
5/7/5 entry for New Arrival Poetry25 total reviews
Comment from royowen
You've captured the fist few words spoken to bring creation into being. Isn't it funny, it describes perfectly what Hebrews 11:1 says. Beautifully written and a good entry in this contest, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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You've captured the fist few words spoken to bring creation into being. Isn't it funny, it describes perfectly what Hebrews 11:1 says. Beautifully written and a good entry in this contest, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 05-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much!
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Welcome
Comment from AnnaLinda
Wow! Sylvia!
You use only 17 syllables and it's as if you wrote an entire essay on the
creation of the world. Such creative thoughts you've expressed here
in those limited word and syllable counts.
A "wonder" indeed...our Father is the original author and original
creator...Resting on the 7th day. Very spiritual post and most
beautiful imagery within your words.
Anna
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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Wow! Sylvia!
You use only 17 syllables and it's as if you wrote an entire essay on the
creation of the world. Such creative thoughts you've expressed here
in those limited word and syllable counts.
A "wonder" indeed...our Father is the original author and original
creator...Resting on the 7th day. Very spiritual post and most
beautiful imagery within your words.
Anna
Comment Written 05-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much!
Comment from bhogg
A very nice post. So often, this type of format doesn't make any sense without accompanying artwork. Yours did. Really like that second line, 'Creation By Word Alone'.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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A very nice post. So often, this type of format doesn't make any sense without accompanying artwork. Yours did. Really like that second line, 'Creation By Word Alone'.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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Thank you for taking the time to review my poem.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This New Arrival Poetry Contest Entry speaks about the art of creation of the universe in just six days, makes a wonder in word to everyone; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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This New Arrival Poetry Contest Entry speaks about the art of creation of the universe in just six days, makes a wonder in word to everyone; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 05-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much for the five star review, much appreciated.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job with your contest entry. I enjoyed reading it. Good job with the syllable count per line. The picture is a good pairing with your thoughtful words. Thanks for sharing.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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You did a good job with your contest entry. I enjoyed reading it. Good job with the syllable count per line. The picture is a good pairing with your thoughtful words. Thanks for sharing.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
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Comment Written 05-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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Thank you for taking the time to review my poem and for your kind words.
